August 7, 2007 -
luckypluskyle
Okay is this another of my OC's, Haji. He's friends with Toriana but Toriana doesn't count him as a friend since they've been friends for like, ever, and she sees him as more of a brother. Enjoy! I'm open to critiques! ^^ -kyle
One small itty-bitty piece of advice. You made the wall look a little too flat. Try adding a bit more grainy colouring and more shade in parts to make it look, what's that word again?.....authentic?*shrugs*
Sister: Yay! Such pretty work! Relina stop being so critical!
Me: *Glare*I'm not being overly critical! And he asked for concrit so a gave some! I want to help hem get BETTER. Telling him it's 'soooo kawaii' and then not giving advice isn't going to HELP him get better is it?!(and I think it would waste his time)
Sister:......*Walks off*
Me: Thought so. Anyway, still a really good piece. I wonder if you would draw me a piccy of me....*giggles* Nah.