Into the Smoke by ARCHERcat

Into the Smoke by ARCHERcat

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October 27, 2007 - ARCHERcat

Its an emo girl, watching her life go up into smoke...
You could say shes based off of me...
But this poem goes with it...

I sit here watching peacefully
From this stony rest
I stay away from the destruction
Knowing its for the best
I watch my life go up in smoke
Yet I cannot do a thing
Im left with no dreams or hopes
Unless I were to get my wings
I watch my life before me
Knowing its the end
Nothing now will comfort me
I guess I should pretend
That my life was still before me
And the smoke would all be gone
As I hear my mind telling me
What I have done wrong
I watch helplessly as my life goes up in smoke
Foolishly make believing that there is still one hope
My life has long passed now
The smoke has blown away
But my dreams still rest with man
Until another day.

Yeppers peppers, I wrote that myself :DDD
Hope ya like!!
Comment me please!!

General Info

Rating	No objectionable content	Media	MS Paint / etc.
		Time Taken	A loooooooong time...
Submitted	October 27, 2007
Keywords	emo, girl, into, the, smoke
License	Berne Convention

5 Comments

Oct 28, 2007 01:24 PM by: Irken_Akire

Oh wowz. I looooove the poem, so nicely written and emotional! *tear*
I love the picture as well! very nice! *pokes puffs of smoke* xD I love it! *hugs*

Oct 29, 2007 06:37 PM by: ARCHERcat

Daw thankees Akire!! C:
Im putting the poem on my website (unless I update it again -_-) but Ill tell you when thats up
Oh yeah...Poem courtesy of my poem-lovin' emo mind!! XD

Oct 28, 2007 12:19 AM by: Falconlobo

cool^^

Oct 28, 2007 03:49 AM by: ARCHERcat

Thankees!! :D

Oct 28, 2007 04:11 AM by: Falconlobo

you're welcome^^