Uh... halflings? Lyn is of the race of man. Unless this is suppose to be like a parody, then nevermind...

Otherwise, Good line consistency. I don't know about the position of the torsos. They look like they're connected at the shoulder and chest.

Ah... If it were SO easy to call but EVERY man the same race, I would not have been on the receiving end of such hate. However, a single race though MAN may be, there are many who consider those of different ethnicities to be of different Races (unfortunatly)... These two Women have beared a similar fate by being born of two DIFFERENT ethnicities, and have thus unfortunatly been subjected to the seemingly inevidable public segregation that comes there with...
 
... As for your oppinion... You are right, as usual. The Torso and Shoulders were the hardest part to get to my satisfaction. Even now I wish I did beter on that part. I'm a long way from perfection, but public oppinion is Essential to gettin as close as possable... So, Thanks again. Your observation is Noted! lol  \^o^/ 

Yay!this looks awesome!!S*** i turned 18 2 days ago but oh well!*favs*

Grats on the B-day hun ^_^... Time to get a apartment!

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!jks well yeah rinny's pissing me of >.<
oh well that's my sister!gotta love her *makes a fake smile*

Niiiiiiiiiiice. :3 *faves it*

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