November 2, 2007 -
AlexMontgomery
Yeah, I'm starting to wonder if Alex is origenal or not. I'm not so worried about my other OC's for her stories, but it's Alex I'm really worried about.
Okay, if you don't know her all that well here's the basic info.
Alexandra "Alex" Montgomery
Fifteen year of age
Freshmen/Sophmore (Haven't desided) in Domino High
Duelst/ Ex-Doma Duelist
Favorite cards include Magicians Valkriea (Ka in the past) Wingweaver (Her mother's past life's Ka), Dark Magician, Dark Magician Girl (Ka of her past life's sister), Red-Eyes Black Dragon, Meskhenet Guardian of Destiny(Made-up card)
She has an eighth Millennium Item
She's the reincarnation of a High Priestess
She WAS supost to be married to Atem three thousand years ago, they were engagged since they were both young. They were close friends since they were young(There father's thought it'd be better then marrying complet strangers) they fell in love with each other as they got older but NEVER admited it to each other, due to a fear that there love will not be returned, and would ruine there life-long friendship. Both had died before they could marry. (Yeah, they were pretty dumb the first time around)
She'd been reincarnated over time for the last three thousand years.
She DOSE NOT have a Yami but can talk to her past life in her Soul Room.
Her mother died when she was four, and lived with an abusive father until she was seven, when she had met Dartz and became a Doma Duelist. A pretty weak one at the time.
To stay as ture to the origenal as I can Katsuya Jonouchi dosen't duel in this story (DON'T HURT ME JOEY-FANS!!!)
She has a deep hatred for Anzu Mazaki that gose back Egypt as Hathor(Alex) and Teana(Anzu).
She dosn't have boy's throwing themselves at her. Varon had a bit of a crush on her when they were younger, and Katsuya did wonder at one point if he thought of her as more then a friend (Hathor, being a a little rebellion from her engagment had a short romance with Jono(Jonouchi)), but nothing more.
Like Yami/Yugi and Kaiba she has a Legendary Knight/Dragon of her own named Xena, who was Dartz younger sister.
That's all I can think of right now. Somethings I won't change.
I won't change Meskhent, I'm not completly satisfied with how the Creater of Light was summoned. Fuse three male monsters to get a FEMALE?!
I won't change her past. I know a fair amount of Marry-Sues have dark past, if I could I could have avoided it if I wanted too. Every Doma duelist have a dark past, so I needed Alex to have one if she were to be a Doma Duelist.
I won't change the engagment between Hathor and Atem. I have yet to see very many fanfics where there was an aranged marrage. Most I've seen the OC was just some girl from the streets.
But I am willing to get rid of her Sword if that makes her a Sue. (Plus it's kinda hard to draw)
PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK!!!!
And just know I won't be mad if you say she is. I just want to know if I need to improve her or not.
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I've never seen one of your story's or drawings. And the describtion is way too long jeez. But anyways, hopefully this anwser already helps.