Anywho... yeah... my earlier pic is now colored. And the white thing nest to the gold sash? Yeah, thats her tail. And despite popular thought, SHE IS A FULL DEMON DOG SARNIT!!!!!
Looks fine to me! Just don't be afraid to color! (As though I really have a right to say that, lol, since in a lot of my earliest pics, the coloring is so faint that they don't even look colored! ^ ^;;; )
A suggestion for the next time you color a pic of this character: Try using a light grey colored pencil for the shading on the hair, and 'burnt ochre' (aka 'Light Brown') for the skin's shading.