This is from my fanfiction, Luigi's Dragons, found on fanfiction.net here, rated K+ for violence and nothin' else! :) You can check it out if you like.
The drawing I did quickly in 30 minutes. I just felt like drawing a beat up Luigi, so I drew a scene from my fanfiction where Luigi is beat up. A lot. Don't get me wrong, I love luigi!
Aside from the messy marker lines, its a decent peice. Anatomy of the ribcage is slightly off.
Augh, you forgot to color his socks!
Your foreshortening attempt on his left leg could use a bit more improvement. The pants are a bit hard to do, I know, but with a little practice you should get it.
And is that an anime eye I see? *slaps you* HAHAHA! JK! Don't hurt me! :P
I like it, nice job =) Seems a bit muscular for Luigi but still a really good pic either way. Good shading and details, the way you shaded the hair was great. Love it ^_^, Luigi ownz XD! *faves*
Sounds like an interesting story. I may check it out once I stop being lazy and decide to read something for once ^^;
Don't be surprised. I know this person. She's actually very close to me. Haha, we share a computer! XD