This is awesome great job the coloring and drawing itself is awesome

nice outfits and hair good shading of colors

SVEET!!!! Jooh Color Neat. O.O Whoa

Akane: DUSK! *Runs to Hug Him*

Dusk: Hey akane!*hugs her*

awesome, nice coulours^^
i like their hair

Yeah, I had trouble with Genesis cuz I couldnt decide what style I wanted.
Dusk was easy, just the coloring, I didnt know whether to make it black with red banes or brown...

ssssssswwwwwwwwwwwwweeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet!

*squeals* G-genesis!!!! *hug* He's mine!

Genesis*laughs, hugs her* Hey Nara my girl.....happy to see me in living color? *smiles*

Me: *Mumbling*

Shweet! ^^ They look awesome, dude! Thier torso's are slightly big in comparison to the rest of thier bodies, but that's okay with your style. =3 Dude, Dusk looks badass. o.O Genesis does too, but in a different way. Good job!

Thank ye shara!
I made their upper torso's bigger cuz Dusk is inheritting his fathers build, and he's a lot older now. And obviously....Genesis is always going to be big no matter what...its in his genetics....

Please tell me you didn't just mispell my name. XDDD Bad boy!

Well, I know that they're gonna be muscle men, but you gotta take proportions into mind. DBZ isn't exactly the most correct when it comes to that sort of thing, since people normally don't look like that. XDDD But you can worry 'bout that sort of thing later. =3 I like how it looks anyways.

Sorry Shera.....my bad.

To tell the truth, I am taking proportions into mind. This isnt DBZ style either....this was just me all relaxed and not stressed out about how I wanted it to look. I just knew what I wanted to put to the page and I did it. I dont have a particular style, nor do I intend to. I just get into a feeling and follow it. This was just the product. Im actually really impressed with this one because its one of my best aside from deathknells.

XDDD 'Tis okay. I know you're probably all frazzled and shtuffles from work. <3

Well, I do like your style. =3 Considering that you haven't been drawing for too too long, this is actually really good! =3 This one is basically your best yet, I think. You're getting better! I was just pointing shtuff out, but you can deal with that later. =3

Well, thankies Shera.
Im still writing the part where Oni meets Selema, I'll get it to you sometime, but right now iM really trying to work on Suka...I've missed out on her for too long....

Shweet! ^^ That'll be fun. =3 And no problem 'bout that- I know how it is. I have an insane urge to work more on "Magik?" myself. If only I had the time. T_T