The style is dated but all in all it's skillfully drawn. It give a static impression though, much like an action figure as opposed to a person. Soften the stance and come a step away from the picturesque image in your mind of a character, allow his cape to fall and hang from him and loosen the fit of the clothing, spandex hugging every contour isn't completely accurate anyway, and you'll start to grasp a more amicable style to which people can better relate.

I suppose the style would be a bit dated, since the picture is 25 years old. The picturesque image was intentional, as he is a superpowered paladin. This also explains the tightness of the clothes, since I was going for a superhero kind of look. If you'll look closely, you will see the shirt isn't quite as tight as the pants. I do agree with your general assessment though. I got better than that later on, but I haven't drawn in years, and my hands don't work as well as they used to. Thanks for the advice, but I probably won't be doing anything new, though my daughter keeps pushing me.

haha, very good. the character does look like its 25 year old. i like the yellow effect that happens to the paper after a long time. very well done.

Thanks. It's his hair, right? I keep thinking of Michael Knight from the old Knightrider show when I see it. I wished my hands worked well enough to do more like him, but I do still have some old stuff I'm going to post.