Risk -Unfinished- Improvement?

OH YOU WERE ASKING IF IT HAD IMPROVED NOT HOW TO IMPROVE IT OH HO
http://i235.photobucket.com/albums/ee289/PaDittSkift/ffffffffffff.png
well that's still there so it's too late now
Also, the shading IN the hair is really sporadic. Hair is hard to make look right.
Other than that, tremendous improvement!!!
Can I see a reference, mayhaps?

Ahahaha! That's why I gave up!! EDITING OVER 9000!

Blarg, I knew there was a shootpot of mistakes buuuut I figured only I would give a shoot and notice lol (And I said it wuz unfinished, yo)

Although I know the 'rule' for eyes (that pupils should be at the corner of the lips, eyes should be one 'eye' width apart, ect.) In your edit the eyes look too close together (But maybe that's because the lips are too narrow in my picture...)

And the lightsource(s) don't 'agree' with the entire picture because I began shading as I usually do (With a top light source) then remembered that I wanted the primary light source to be from the feather (light source from below). (And I was gonna add homo glowy 'snow' shoot like in the original picture so I lit the side of her hair to add that in later. Oh well.)

Sorry for the art doging, I found this piece to be particularly frustrating... However, I really appreciate that you'd take the time to help :O Thanks Benk =D

So do you take art classes? You should maek moar artz!!

As for references, I kinda tried to do iDNAR's (on dA) style, I ain't NEARLY as good as he is, but it's not bad for my first (sorta) realistic CG work, right? FUUUCCCCKK BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAWWW http://idnar.deviantart.com/art/Kuchiki-Rukia-63711672

tl;dr ART dogING~! HOORAY!!

Haha it's not bad
but yeah I agree with you on the eyes thing. I'm not sure what happened there in my edit.
and nah I don't take art classes


YOU'LL MAKE IT, STONER, JUST KEEP ON TRUCKIN'

oh shoot iDNAR makes pretty anime :O !

I KNOW BAAAAAAAW God, his work is beautiful D': I wanna be able to draw liek that... Also, thanks for the kind words :D

I just thought you took art classes because you know your shoot lol, I haven't taken any art classes either, all I got are two old-@$$ anatomy books from the 50's/60's lawl

Random question; Do you have another art account on another site os something? You seem to be pretty good with art stuff but you don't have much here so maybe it's elsewhere? I'd liek to see it :3

I browse /ic/ and my brother bought me a pretty shootty art book once lol
and nah i don't
I have a DA account but it only has one more thing on it
thirty7.deviantart.com


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