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Challenge 6 - Break Away

Challenge 6 - Break Away

Challenge 6 - Break Away by _ren_tao_fan_
Challenge 6 - Break Away by _ren_tao_fan_

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Prepare yourselves. Shey is about to go off on a rant.
...........
I'M MAD.
I'M REALLY VERY UPSET.
This picture is based off the events that occurred in the book New Moon. Basically, what happened was, Edward dumped Bella because he was afraid that he'd accidentally EAT HER. He was rather cruel about it, pretending as if he didn't really care that he was, without any warning whatsoever, moving his entire family far, far away from Forks. But that's not what's bothering me. True, Edward could've been a little gentler, but since I don't support EdwardBella anyway, it doesn't matter too much to me. What's bothering me is the way Bella reacted to this.
Okay, how long, exactly, had they been together until this happened? Six months, if that? Since I REALLY DON'T feel like going back to check, we'll just say they'd been together for six months, and anyone who knows the real answer can come and correct me. The point is, they really hadn't been together for very long at all. And, after Edward left, Bella was virtually lifeless for FOUR MONTHS STRAIGHT. Lifeless, you know. Not showing any interest in anything. Tired all the time. Okay, yeah, I get it. Breakups are hard. You're sad for a while, you get together with some girlfriends and eat ice cream to feel better, and then you get OVER it. That's how it goes. Maybe, maybe, if you've been MARRIED to the man for a matter of YEARS, then you could go and act like a zombie when he leaves you, but these two have only been together for a matter of months. So I can't help but find Bella dependent, which isn't a good thing in my book.
BUT THEN. BUT THEN. BUT THEN, after certain events caused them to meet up again (of course. How else could Stephanie Meyer have written two other books about them?) do you think she might be a little bit angry at him for, in a way, killing her? Just a tiny bit upset, even for only a little while? AH NO. No, no, no. The thought of being angry at the PERFECTION that is Edward never crosses Bella's mind. So as soon as she flings herself against him to save his life, she basically never lets go.
So, back to the picture/comic. THIS is what would have happened if I wrote the Twilight series. This is why I should never write a romance novel. For those of you who are all like "WTF what about the part with Edward trying to commit suicide???" Listen. After all that is over, Edward tells Bella that, if there hadn't been the whole misunderstanding with Bella supposedly being dead, he would have come back to Forks so he could beg her to take him back because he wasn't happy without her. So, this picture is Edward, back in Forks, running into Bella and immediately showering her with hugs and kisses and apologies. Unforgiving little betch that I am, I would have Bella turn him away... at least until he groveled to her a LOT more. At LEAST.
...Phew.
It's just that she's so ADDICTED to him, that's what bothers me! (You thought I was finished, LOL.) She's clingy! She doesn't like for him to go anywhere without her! AND, by the end of the first book, she doesn't have any DOUBT that she wants to become a vampire so she can be with him forever, thereby leaving her family and friends behind and confining herself to a life (of sorts) in which she has to hide what she is. And she decides this after knowing him for... MAYBE one school year. If that. One school year with him, and she wants to throw everything away so she can spend an eternal undead existence with her ONE. TRUE. LOVE. It just... doesn't sound right to me. Not to mention the fact that Edward is a stalker who used to secretly watch Bella as she slept. 0_o
...Okay. NOW I'm done. Time to apologize for the overall bad quality of the picture. I lost patience with it halfway through, so I rushed it. I'm not too terribly attached to this picture anyway, it being EdwardBella and all.
Well, all you Anti-Twilight fans out there, enjoy.

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luckylace222 on February 28, 2012, 5:17:36 AM

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luckylace222I have never read the full series yet! I attempted reading the first book since I do not like judging without the full picture. I stopped 1/3 way through the first book because romance novels can get quite unnecessarily dramatic really really fast. ;___; The writing style was easy to read though.

Indeed, these type of girl-dependent-of-guy or even the other way around can get sentimental and pathetic too quick. Either it is too unrealistic, or it is just so hard to sympathize with a character that has put it all on herself.

You should WRITE a romance. A YAOI one (Ah! There's the catch!) to compensate for reading such reluctant romance!

* innocent smile*

_ren_tao_fan_ on February 28, 2012, 7:36:46 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_Ah, don't worry.


I am. =w=

luckylace222 on February 28, 2012, 12:29:54 PM

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luckylace222*flails arms silently staring at you with bulging eyes* 8D

_ren_tao_fan_ on February 29, 2012, 5:30:53 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_That's right. Thaaaaat's right.

kath on September 4, 2011, 10:06:07 AM

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kathHonestly I have to agree with you here. especially sense he left her knowing she could be attacked by other vampires. I mean come on ed! Your 50 times her age! you don't have the right to act like a stupid teenager! I don't hate Edward. I just think he was an idiot. And i get Bella but if it were me i would have dropped him.

_ren_tao_fan_ on September 8, 2011, 3:25:19 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_Yeah. I kinda lost what respect I had left for her after this incident. She's just too desperate...
Oh, well, I never liked her to begin with. :D
Thanks for the comment. :)

UltimateYoshi1696 on November 7, 2010, 7:49:10 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_ on November 8, 2010, 5:21:20 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_b^-^d

me-someone on September 22, 2010, 8:09:20 AM

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me-someoneWOO FOR ANTI-TWILIGHTERS!! I don't even want to use the words now... however... the word 'twilight' is so pretty cool. SCREW YOU!

Anyways... yeah, my perspective of vampires is that they're MONSTERS!! GRAWELDMKVFUISDSIL!*<-random monster noise*

I bought this drawing-oriented magazine the last Con I went.. It has info on vampires, SHOWIN 'EM AS GOOD OL' DAMNED BEASTLY CREATURES. Maybe I'm gonna draw one to show you.

HOWEVER I prefer werewolves.. sorry, I'm on the other side lol

and I don't care if this contains spoilers.. because I'm not planning to watch the movie ANY DAY. Woohoo for freedom!

BTW.. what does break away exactly mean? (sorry for my ignorance but.. heh, native-spanish-talker lol)

_ren_tao_fan_ on September 22, 2010, 8:37:02 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_Twilight IS a cool word. I am ready to admit this. Still, though, whenever I hear it I think of the books, so I don't like it as much as I used to. D>
And YES. Vampires are carnivorous terrifying MONSTERS who are meant to SCARE you, not beautiful sparkling magical sex beasts who wants to marry you. D:
And I prefer werewolves too. But the "werewolves" in Twilight aren't true werewolves, because they can choose when they transform. Real werewolves don't have any control over that, if I'm not mistaken.
And LOL, it's okay. ^^ Here, break away means to dissolve your relationship with someone you don't want to have anything to do with anymore, thereby breaking away from them. I hope that clears things up. :)

me-someone on September 22, 2010, 9:05:06 AM

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me-someoneoh it sure did, thanks a lot ^^
and you're right with the werewolves thingie... They gotta be ready when is that going to happen... And don't get mad with me, but I was kinda cheerful when Sonic Unleashed went out... (OKAY, FACE IT GIRL! U LIKED HIM SQUISHY AND FURRY! DAMN IT!)

_ren_tao_fan_ on September 22, 2010, 10:07:24 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_Squishy furry Sonic is awesome. :/ I do wish I could play that game, though! It just looks SO AWESOME. He's a WEREHOG.

lashanta22 on August 21, 2010, 8:47:46 AM

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lashanta22sad but i do not understand what draws fan girls to this crap lol
i mean dont get me wrong i love vampires....THE OLD VAMPIRES!!! these new ones are too lovey dovey and all that lol

_ren_tao_fan_ on August 21, 2010, 1:23:48 PM

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_ren_tao_fan_I know! I liked vampires before they were sexy...
Did you read the description? Because if you didn't, you might be totally misunderstood with how I feel about Twilight. :/

lashanta22 on August 21, 2010, 6:17:28 PM

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lashanta22no read it^^ that is just the way i see it is all. i remember dracula with the long cape and all that....NOW THERE IS A REAL VAMPIRE!!!!

_ren_tao_fan_ on August 21, 2010, 11:09:33 PM

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_ren_tao_fan_You didn't read it? Aw. I spent so long writing it. :[
XD LOL it's okay, you don't have to read it. I can just sum it up in five words: I do NOT like Twilight.
AND OH MY GOD I KNOW. Dracula wasn't just a freaking vampire... he was THE FREAKING VAMPIRE. He had fangs and he could turn into a BAT, man! HE WAS. THE ORIGINAL BATMAN.

lashanta22 on August 22, 2010, 8:33:27 AM

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lashanta22i meant i DID read it^^
i just got done watching a dracula movie and it was awesome! my step mom has a movie about him and his life......it was a desturbing life lol
his wife went nuts and all that and he also had a son

_ren_tao_fan_ on August 22, 2010, 11:50:38 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_XD Oh ^^ Sorry for the misunderstanding.
I didn't know he had a son! Maybe I should rent a Dracula movie. :D (I have one in my Netflix queue. It has Marc Warren starring as Dracula, I believe. I could be wrong, though. All I know of the movie is what my sister told me of it.)

lashanta22 on August 22, 2010, 6:41:56 PM

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lashanta22oh that is ok. YUP!!! the sexy drac had a son and they called him a vampire because every time they thought he died he came back to life.
at the end of the movie it says that all they found in his coffin were animal remains....interesting stuff!!!

_ren_tao_fan_ on August 22, 2010, 11:12:58 PM

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_ren_tao_fan_Oh, you watched the one with Marc Warren? I watched a Dracula movie once, but I can't remember who was Dracula. Also I can't remember what happened... I think some girl kinda was posessed and... IDFK.
OH WAIT. I did watch a really old Dracula movie before, it was in black-and-white. I thought that was pretty cool. :)

lashanta22 on August 23, 2010, 9:05:04 AM

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lashanta22i dont remember the name of the movie but it is my fav about him

_ren_tao_fan_ on August 23, 2010, 9:22:02 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_LOL, I think the vast majority of Dracula movies are called Dracula. XD
Christopher Lee has been Dracula so many times in so many different movies, it's scary.

lashanta22 on August 23, 2010, 10:55:36 AM

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lashanta22lol i would actually love to go to translvania and see all this stuff with my own eyes.....so awesome!!!

_ren_tao_fan_ on August 24, 2010, 12:19:06 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_I know right? That would kick butt to see the actual Dracula's castle :D

lashanta22 on August 24, 2010, 10:30:00 AM

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lashanta22omg yes it would^^ i love dark castles...they are so interesting!!!
i dont really like history but when it comes to things like dracula and myths....OHHHH YEA!!!

_ren_tao_fan_ on August 25, 2010, 4:35:07 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_I went to Blarney Castle. :D It was so cool because it had all these dark caves in it... I wish I had had a flashlight!
And I'm kind of a big fan of history. Probably one of my favorite subjects in school :) I just find it all so interesting, especially concerning medieval times. So many castles :3

lashanta22 on August 25, 2010, 6:40:40 AM

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lashanta22that is awesome!!! i bet you had so much fun!!!! i loved biology in school

_ren_tao_fan_ on August 25, 2010, 11:06:33 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_It was SO MUCH FUN! LOL, I had to find my way by taking pictures of the path ahead of me with my camera, and then looking at the picture to see where to go XD Someday I have to go back to Ireland just to explore those caves more ^^
Biology was a cool class! One of my favorite Science courses, that's for sure. :3 My least favorite Science would have to be Chemistry... ugh... *shudder*

lashanta22 on August 25, 2010, 3:38:52 PM

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lashanta22i wish i could go there:( maybe someday i can...ya never know^^
im drawing a vampire pic right now and it is not going to be your normal girl love high school crap either hehe
i never to chemistry our school just did not have it.

_ren_tao_fan_ on August 25, 2010, 11:45:48 PM

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_ren_tao_fan_You've got your whole life ahead of you. :D
AND I SAW IT. IT WAS THE GREATEST THING EVOR.
And be thankful.

lashanta22 on August 26, 2010, 9:20:55 AM

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lashanta22lol thanks

Falconlobo on August 21, 2010, 3:02:02 AM

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Falconlobonice scene i don't read or watch any of the movies so yeh does not bother me^^

_ren_tao_fan_ on August 21, 2010, 3:05:13 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_I read the whole series because everyone was saying how great it was. I guess romance novels aren't really my thing.
Thanks for the comment. :)

Falconlobo on August 21, 2010, 3:06:59 AM

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Falconlobonp^^ people were trying to get me into it i just am not really a vampire person as much as a werewolf only or weres in general^^

_ren_tao_fan_ on August 21, 2010, 4:17:46 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_Well, it's not like I have anything against vampires, I just like the more traditional version of vampires. And werewolves are pretty much always cool. :D (Except the ones in Twilight, which aren't true werewolves.)

Falconlobo on August 21, 2010, 5:00:18 AM

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Falconloboyeh i like the anthro werewolfs with fur and tails and like Werewolf in London or Thriller^^

_ren_tao_fan_ on August 21, 2010, 1:17:50 PM

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_ren_tao_fan_Anthro werewolves are definitely preferable over non-anthro. I like the werewolves in the Bloodmoon expansion of Morrowind for the Xbox :)

Falconlobo on August 21, 2010, 1:27:50 PM

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Falconlobocool^^ i like John Taliban can't spell blue werewolves yay^^ ^^

_ren_tao_fan_ on August 21, 2010, 11:10:00 PM

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_ren_tao_fan_Blue werewolves? LOL that sounds silly but cool :D

Falconlobo on August 22, 2010, 9:54:58 AM

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Falconloboyeh John Talban or something from Darkstalkers

_ren_tao_fan_ on August 22, 2010, 11:51:15 AM

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_ren_tao_fan_That is a really cool-looking werewolf, even if it isn't wolf-colored!

Falconlobo on August 22, 2010, 12:34:30 PM

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Falconloboyup^

Falconlobo on August 22, 2010, 9:57:08 AM

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Falconlobo on August 21, 2010, 5:00:33 AM

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Falconlobowerewolves i meant

_ren_tao_fan_ on August 21, 2010, 1:14:18 PM

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_ren_tao_fan_LOL I knew what you meant ^^

Falconlobo on August 21, 2010, 1:16:51 PM

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Falconloboah okay^^