Mythos Pangea

EDIT: Okay, rescanned lighter to get rid of all the smudgy-ness. lol Added her hair, edited her wings a bit and changed the energy about her hands. I think this Mythos version is complete.... now to get to coloring. Sometime. ^^"

I worked on this alot. X_x You can tell by all the horrible smudging and erased lines(you can still see) that I worked longer on this than I usually try. And it's still not done!
Her wings could use a bit of editing, I'm gonna change the way the energy looks about her hands, and I have yet to even start sketching her hair. And once it's done, would it be worth coloring...? Hmm...

Btw, this is the original art of Mythos Zero, this is style I tried to apply to Pangea: http://fc05.deviantart.net/fs70/i/2010/202/e/9/High_Resolution_Mythos_Art_by_nailthehedgehog.png

Also, I was highly inspired by these great fan designs of Mythos style: http://seig-verdelet.deviantart.com/art/MMZ-Leviathan-Mythos-183297095?q=boost%3Apopular%20mythos...
http://zeromidnight.deviantart.com/favourites/10326733#/d3aia5c

So what do you guys think, of Pangea's Mythos design so far?