Cute, and you have potential, but you might want to study some live models. Pictures in magazines are a great way to start. It'll help a lot with your proportions and placing of features.
OMG THIS PIC ROX!! i love her hair, the scar type thing on her left eye rox! and her clothes r wicked!!! SWEET! wicked job. LOL... n da names kewll.... ^-^
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i think i got better...O.o