Always and Forever Page One!!

its the first page of my mini series, always adn forever!! Its a lil hard to follow, so ill type what theyre saying:<br />
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Panel 1:<br />
Toast: where are you going?<br />
Kane: the shower.<br />
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Panel 2: [A couple Minutes Later...]<br />
Kane: I'm singing in the shower!<br />
(the curtain) shuffle, rustle<br />
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Panel 3: [Oustide of the shower...]<br />
Toast: I wonder what a shower is...<br />
{page is folded up} The Author --> He can't shower cause his wing!<br />
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Panel 4: <br />
Toast: what does one do when one is in the shower... <br />
{Random flowers?}<br />
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Panel 5: <br />
Toast: I'm gonna investigate! <br />
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Panel 6: <br />
{< shower curtain}<br />
Toast: I'll just open this really carefully...<br />
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Panel 7: [In the shower]<br />
Kane: Hm...<br />
(squeak)<br />
(move)<br />
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Panel 8:<br />
Kane: AH!<br />
Toast: Surprise!<br />
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FINIS! <br />
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i hope you like it!