The All New Motoko *sketch*

Here's a sketch I did of a scene from ch.13 of my fanfic. The girl behind Motoko is Carolyn, a character from my Abiotic Factor stories. I'm not going to ruin the scene for anyone who hasn't read the story yet (even though my writing skills are worse than my drawing skills ^_^), but basically Carolyn is trying to further Motoko and Amadeus's relationship by dressing Motoko in a whole new wardrobe. Now I know that there's a lot of mistakes on this but I'll fix them if I finish the pic. (Isn't embarassing characters the greatest ^_^)