Disposable Soldier: Cover Page

This is the cover page to my first attempt at a manga. The title sucks, but I can't really think up a better one. There is another page that goes along wit this one that I am not putting up because it is purely words. But here is what it says:

Nearly two centuries passed since the second millenia before the great nations fell, their militaries borken. Large cities stayed intact, yet they became more militant, defending themsleves from unwanted company. This worked for over a decade before military parties rose up from several non-metropolitan establishments. Their first targets were the cities, but that soon led to war amongst the parties. Few cities were destoryed, the parties caring more to kill each other. The parties eventually grouped into two organizations: the Aries' Militia and the Cortez Armada. Both were made up of people from all corners of the world.

It has been fifteeen years since the formation of the organizations, and they still continue to quarrel.

Well, that's what the second page said. Anyway, I'm not the best artist, so contructive critcism is welcomed.