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Disposable Soldier: Page 3

Disposable Soldier: Page 3

Disposable Soldier: Page 3 by Burgundy-Sky
Disposable Soldier: Page 3 by Burgundy-Sky

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Burgundy-Sky
This picture is misproportioned is several ways. Her arms are too small, her head seems too big, and in the second frame her neck looks two long and skinny. But, I tried to proportion the second frame correctly, but it didn't quite work. The text is hard to read, so here it is: (I'll do this for all of them because I don't type in the text.)<br />
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Person one: "...Calyse Faline..."<br />
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Person two: "...Ah...I see. She will have to do..."<br />
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Second Frame: Calyse-"Dumbass."<br />
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Second Frame: Another person-"Huh?"<br />
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That is the text. As always, constructive criticism is appreciated, along with any random comments.

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