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Star Wars; Elle #1

Star Wars; Elle #1

Star Wars; Elle #1 by Crystalgirl29
Star Wars; Elle  #1 by Crystalgirl29

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Crystalgirl29
Title:THE BEGINNING OF OUR STORY



Elle is about arrive at her new Jedi training temple...located on Courasant.

Thats were Obi-1 and Anakin Skywalker trained!!!-Elle thought, she was very excited, however unjedilike it was of her...

When she finally arrived, a droid showed her her room and told her after she got settled she was to immediately report to the Counsel.
"hmm...i wonder why they want to see me?"
"I don''t know Miss, im just the messenger droid."
-and with that the little droid left-

Elle unpacked her things, put on her best robe, clipped her blue lightsaber to her belt and set off for the High Counsel''s tower,
she got odd stares from people in the hallways, she tried to be polite by smiling at them but that only made the people turn away in embarrassment.
She sighed and kept walking...

When she got there another droid was there to greet her and told her to wait for her name to be called over the comm.
All she could think was "I hope i didn''t do something wrong my first day..."

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unimaginative title...i know:)

please tell me what u think!
& they won''t always be this short XD
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and yes i coulda made the pic more detailed...but i dident feel like it!:P

haha-tell me what u think:)

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Category Movies » Star Wars » Fan Characters (OC's)
Date Submitted
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Favorites... 1
Vote Score 1
Comments 4
Media Ink or markers
Time Taken pic: 15mins story:5mins
Reference Ash's story...but im NOT trying to copy he
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Crystalgirl29 on July 12, 2009, 12:31:38 AM

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Crystalgirl29Thank you!
is isnt it??

Devon11 on July 11, 2009, 2:21:44 PM

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Devon11This is such a cute pic! I find it to be detailed just perfectly! ^^
Such a cute story!
Wow... up there with Obi-wan abd Anakin. That's coolio! ^^

Crystalgirl29 on July 11, 2009, 11:57:22 AM

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Crystalgirl29Hey! Thankies 4 actually reading it!!!!

um...ull just have to wait...k?
-im gonna 'splane it...dont u worry:)

Oh, ya think?

starwarsdood on July 11, 2009, 11:24:23 AM

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starwarsdoodvery much right.

But the thing is...people are usually taken at the age of 1 to 3. How old is she??

Did a master find her and then found her to be incredibly stong, so they made a large exception.

Other than the age thing, it's a nice beginning, very realistic...Every jedi-to-be would be excited to be trained in the very same spot as Obi-wan Kenobi and Anakin Skywalker!!

Oh, and Elle is a cute name!!