star wars: Elle #4
star wars: Elle #4
star wars: Elle #4 by Crystalgirl29
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Elle ran down the hall fast as she could almost crashing into the group of younglings-they laughed as she slid out of the way
"Oh, gosh!"
she said as she looked at the clock
"ill be late!"
she COULD NOT be late the 1st day...
"whew! 2 minutes to spare!!"
she walked in
"You must be Elle."
said a pink skinned woman....she walked up and shook her hand.
"Im Sari! Im one of the instructors...Yoda told me to expect you."
Elle looked around the room-it was filled with people her own age...fighting against each other ...one pair caught her eye
a guy and girl-they were pretty good!
uh oh the girl slipped up "no! dont do that!!"-she thought
it was too late he grabbed her arm and smacked her down onto the floor...
the girl started cracking up
"Ow! haha wow, uh, that hurt...alot."
he helped her up-Elle could tell he was asking if she was okay-she nodded...
this all happened in spit seconds of course-but Sari could tell she she was interested in what they were doing.
"thats Jade."
"what?"
"the young man is Jade. and the girl is Lucy. Jade is one of the best fighters we have!"
"Oh, thats cool! hey, so, what is it that im going to be doing exactly?"
"Ah, yes, I would like you to start hand to hand combat with Prida."
"Prida?"
"Yes, Prida is a very good at hand to hand, you can learn alot im sure!"
"alright."
"Prida!!! Prida...could you come over here please?"
a redskined girl with white hair and curios white markings on her face walked over...
"Prida...Elle...Elle,Prida!"
"haha hi!"
prida shook her hand
"should we get started Elle?"
"um, sure? haha i dont really know what we're doing."
"Ok, just like dodging punches and stuff at first...we'll take it slow. "
"haha okay."
they did take it slow 4 awhile...ill resume the story with them getting in some real action
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the end:):)
comments plez
"Oh, gosh!"
she said as she looked at the clock
"ill be late!"
she COULD NOT be late the 1st day...
"whew! 2 minutes to spare!!"
she walked in
"You must be Elle."
said a pink skinned woman....she walked up and shook her hand.
"Im Sari! Im one of the instructors...Yoda told me to expect you."
Elle looked around the room-it was filled with people her own age...fighting against each other ...one pair caught her eye
a guy and girl-they were pretty good!
uh oh the girl slipped up "no! dont do that!!"-she thought
it was too late he grabbed her arm and smacked her down onto the floor...
the girl started cracking up
"Ow! haha wow, uh, that hurt...alot."
he helped her up-Elle could tell he was asking if she was okay-she nodded...
this all happened in spit seconds of course-but Sari could tell she she was interested in what they were doing.
"thats Jade."
"what?"
"the young man is Jade. and the girl is Lucy. Jade is one of the best fighters we have!"
"Oh, thats cool! hey, so, what is it that im going to be doing exactly?"
"Ah, yes, I would like you to start hand to hand combat with Prida."
"Prida?"
"Yes, Prida is a very good at hand to hand, you can learn alot im sure!"
"alright."
"Prida!!! Prida...could you come over here please?"
a redskined girl with white hair and curios white markings on her face walked over...
"Prida...Elle...Elle,Prida!"
"haha hi!"
prida shook her hand
"should we get started Elle?"
"um, sure? haha i dont really know what we're doing."
"Ok, just like dodging punches and stuff at first...we'll take it slow. "
"haha okay."
they did take it slow 4 awhile...ill resume the story with them getting in some real action
_______________
the end:):)
comments plez
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Category Movies » Star Wars » Fan Characters (OC's)
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Category Movies » Star Wars » Fan Characters (OC's)
Date Submitted
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Media Other digital art
Time Taken like an hr...cuz i was iming my friend at the same
Reference starwars?? OHH MY BRAIN!!!!!
Media Other digital art
Time Taken like an hr...cuz i was iming my friend at the same
Reference starwars?? OHH MY BRAIN!!!!!
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Crystalgirl29 on December 6, 2009, 7:14:48 AM
starwarsdood on December 6, 2009, 6:48:44 AM
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Hey, that's really awesome!So, when they fight with lightsabers make sure they are set to stun.
And kids often have the ability to start with backflips and things, so get creative.
Make sure you talk about being able to feel the force flowing through your body. You will have problems at first, but don't make yourself look uncapable. Jedi younglings/padawans often have amazing skills.
Uhhh, detail.
But I like the humor! Nice touch.
-ya just wait till the next one:):)