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StarWars: Elle #5

StarWars: Elle #5

StarWars: Elle #5 by Crystalgirl29
StarWars: Elle #5 by Crystalgirl29

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“Wow”
prida was amazed at Elle
“Man, Elle, we only had to take it slow for about 2 seconds!!!”
ell was a good fighter allready-she wasn’t quite accustom to Prida’s style …it was very different from anything she had learned in the past…

“Should we go again?”-Prida
“Yeah, defiantly.”
“alright try shutting your eyes this time, feel the force-let it be your guide”
“Yep, yep….im good with it!”
“haha, you shouldn’t be so over confident!”
“Im not trying to be…I just know about feeling the force n all that-okay lets go!!”

Prida threw two punches-dodged, easy peasy
-then she popped up…behind her??
“What? Where did she?”
Elle jabbed her elbow in her stomach …or she thought she did
Prida jumped out of the way to fast-then proceeded to kick her in the back

“Ow!”
“Goin to fast for you?”
“No!!”

Prida tried to spin kick her ankles to get her off balance
Elle jumped up and kicked-and Prida bent…backwards?

“Your not focused on the force enough! Can you really feel it?
You should be able to sense my movements before I make them.”
“Um, okay…….”

Elle concentrated-hard, so hard she thought her head might explode….then a wonderful-sort of peaceful feeling came over her, she blocked out the outside noises…
Then felt a warmness-like a person behind her, not a good feeling though…it wanted to hurt her..
She executed a perfect kick-right in the center

“OH!!!! Ow!! Oh my gosh!”
“Prida! Are you okay?! Im so sorry!”

-she helped her up-she got her right in the stomach
“No! that was great! Very good!...it just hurt…a lot! haha”
“I think we should probably take a break! ”
“Yeah, good idea…I personally don’t think you need much help from me now.”
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The end

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starwarsdood on December 7, 2009, 7:55:08 AM

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starwarsdoodVery good.
Like the details.
I want to know what Prida looks like. Describe her.
And have her meet with other kids. Maybe make some friends.