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Dream (pg 2)

Dream (pg 2)

Dream (pg 2) by Dark_Alchemist
Dream (pg 2) by Dark_Alchemist

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Dark_Alchemist
Page 2!

It reads right to left.

Basically, for those who didn't read the lengthly description on page one, Psyn (guy with black hair) is dreaming. Pretty much the only thing that happens on this page is Kitsune walking into a burning building.

Heh, and this time, not ONLY did I change costume colours on you guys, I changed the style and colour of the fire! The borders on this one are purple, because I wanted a change. It would be boring if the borders on every page were black. Besides, changing colours accentuates the fact it's a dream. And they're more fun that way.

Yeah. I like the last three panels, the very last one in particular. I think I did the flames best in that one. But anywho. I should stop ranting about my colour choices and which panel is my favourite.

-phantom

If you like it, leave a comment! Comments keep me going.

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Category Comics » - Original Comics » - Pages & panels
Date Submitted
Views 1089
Favorites... 3
Vote Score 2
Comments 3
Media Ink or markers
Time Taken Longer than page one. I get distracted easily.
Reference Requiem for a Dream.

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mandy94t on April 7, 2007, 5:59:21 AM

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mandy94tum,pardon me,but I have a bit of constructive criticism...
the sound effect Japanese characters.You're using katakana when you're supposed to use hiragana...just a note,sorry if I was rude.for hiragana alphabet, go here: http://www.freejapaneselessons.con/lesson01.cfm
hope that helps.
OOH!!Kitsune has a Flamel symbol tattoo!!(Flamel symbol A.K.A. winged serpent)love the fire effects,awesome job.
the katakana symbols on the far right read fuantoma??or did I mistranslate?

silverfox on February 17, 2007, 3:03:50 PM

silverfox on
silverfoxSo yeah, uh, your markers hate you. :D

I actually like the fire in the first panel best, because it's the most vibrant. Hehehe, I saw it and for a moment couldn't understand why it seemed fo familiar, then I remembered, " ...Sephiroth!" Then I was like, "Oh yeah."

I want to see these in real life and see how big these pages are. xDD Cuz sheesh, that's a lot of ink.

LemurQueen12 on February 17, 2007, 12:28:01 AM

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LemurQueen12Yay I love this one too
!! =D