Trista O Haven

ok, where to begin... I'm not gonna be a jerk and tell you to never draw again, but you need improvment. This is ALOT better then a few of your older pictures, but still looks like a bit sloppy. One thing that you could keep in mind is that a body has curves. Breasts, Hips, and other curves. Heres a tip to practice on hands, look at your own and draw it, or ask a family member or friend to strike a pose, immitation is the best place to begin. Copying pictures from InuYasha mangas is where I first started to draw, it helps alot! Also, If your going to shade, pick one light source. You have shades all over, none matching a certain light source. I do like the hair though ^_^ I hope I didn't come off as a jerk, this was purly constructive critisism haha.

Hope you keep drawing ^_-

k, I'm still going to keep on drawing... I'm not that great at shading at all. Yeah, this picture is alot better than my sailor moon pictures. I'll try to work on it. :D