One-page Doujin (Kiba/Hinata)

Just a little doodle that progressed into this magnificince. *sarcastic*<br />
You read it from right to left, ending with the largest panel. And for anyone who can't read my handwriting, the script is this: (This is what I originally wanted to write, but there wasn't enough room.)<br />
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Panel 1<br />
Sound fx: Creeaak<br />
Kiba: HINATA!<br />
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Panel 2<br />
sound fx: GRAB<br />
Kiba: *pulls Hinata inside* Get your @$$ in here!<br />
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Panel 3<br />
Sound fx: Click (Kiba closing the door) Bark Bark (the dogs around Hinata)<br />
Kiba: Damn, what the hell were you doing out there?<br />
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Panel 4 (below panel 3)<br />
Hinata: Neji-niisan got in a fight with Naruto-kun, so he couldn't drive me home...<br />
Kiba: DAMN! You'll have to crash here overnight, then, cause I'm not risking my @$$ driving in that weather.<br />
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Panel 5<br />
Sound fx: drip (Rainwater from Hinata's hair) Lick lick (One of the dogs licking her hand)<br />
Hinata: A...are you sure that your mom won't mind?<br />
Kiba: (offscreen) Nah, 'course not.<br />
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And then there's the little test piccy I did of Kiba grinning -- But that has nothing to do with the doujin. It's only a short little sketchy right now, but I'll get around to the real thing soon enough. So what do you think, for a first-time doujinshi-ka?