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My First Comic Strip.

My First Comic Strip.

My First Comic Strip. by DistantDragon
My First Comic Strip. by DistantDragon

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DistantDragon
Ok, so basically whats going on here is that link and rukante both like nika, and when rukante spots link and nika together, he sorta chases link away. Nika doesnt know whats really happening so thats why she is confused at the end.
my boyfriend came up with this idea after i started drawing link and nika together in some of my other pics.

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Category Games » - by Publisher » Nintendo » Legend of Zelda series » Fan Characters (OC's)
Date Submitted
Views 1116
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Vote Score 3
Comments 9
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken an hour or so
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Animaker131 on April 9, 2009, 8:54:12 AM

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Animaker131This looks good! Especially for your first comic. ^v^ I can't really give the best advice on this since I'm still learning about comics myself, but with the knowledge I have, what I noticed is that it's hard to tell exactly what's going on. the first panel is good, but in the second one, it's hard to tell what the character is looking at or getting upset about, you understand what I mean? Since the first panel is your establishing panel, try to have all three characters in that shot. So you know what the second character is getting upset about. The other thing I noticed is Nika is only in the first & last panels. so It's kind of hard to tell where she stands in the whole comic. But like I said, you did good for your first try. Keep it up! ^v^

DistantDragon on April 9, 2009, 10:08:15 PM

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DistantDragonyeah i understand, ^_^ i didnt really know how to place 3 characters in one panel cause i didnt want rukante to be RIGHT next to them, and i still have trouble puting depth into a picture. >_< he would have to be a good distance away, as well as nika in the other panels. thats pretty much why. ^_^

Animaker131 on April 10, 2009, 6:10:25 AM

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Animaker131yeah, I totally understand what you mean. Composing a picture is hard enough, let alone a comic. XD Just another one of those art forms with enough technicalities to make your head spin. XD But just keep working at it. you'll get it. ^V^

SageCardcaptor on April 9, 2009, 11:29:16 PM

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SageCardcaptorLOLOLOLOLOLOLOL

DistantDragon on April 9, 2009, 11:40:58 PM

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DistantDragonglad you think its so funny
^_^

SageCardcaptor on April 10, 2009, 12:58:50 AM

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SageCardcaptor^_^

animespring on April 9, 2009, 2:24:07 AM

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animespringlol Cool!^^

DistantDragon on April 9, 2009, 2:26:00 AM

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DistantDragonthank you!
^_^

animespring on April 9, 2009, 2:26:41 AM

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animespringyou're welcome^^