Evermore_pg1
Evermore_pg1
Evermore_pg1 by Falthee
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Description
Evermore
Vol 1
Page 1
Storyline: Lili is a loner, a sad girl who doesn't like the idea of growing up. When a strange boy named Cassius appears to her, he tells her that she belongs in another place, a place that she has always known within her dreams--Evermore.
No warnings at the moment.
I've never done anything remotely like this before. My talent is more in story writing, but I thought I'd give this a try. Tell me what you think and what I can do to improve. Thanks.
Vol 1
Page 1
Storyline: Lili is a loner, a sad girl who doesn't like the idea of growing up. When a strange boy named Cassius appears to her, he tells her that she belongs in another place, a place that she has always known within her dreams--Evermore.
No warnings at the moment.
I've never done anything remotely like this before. My talent is more in story writing, but I thought I'd give this a try. Tell me what you think and what I can do to improve. Thanks.
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AlysInWonderland on September 14, 2007, 7:54:49 AM
This is awesome! Keep it up^^PatriciaLouise on August 31, 2006, 7:12:27 AM
This is great!!! Love it!black_calm on August 21, 2006, 9:50:09 AM
black_calm on
It's a great job for something done for a first time. I think the close up on her eye with the tear falling from it, the tear should have been more to the far corner of her eye. Also... Did you do that with a pen? If so whoa, drawing with pen is hard.