TFHCBD - Page Eleven by G76

TFHCBD - Page Eleven

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Yeow...look at that wonky writing. Actually, on second thought, don't look at that wonky writing. I was sitting at a desk, with the paper at an angle, and my head at a different angle...and...well...that's what ya get.

Almost at the half way point! XD I was very excited by that. Felt like I was coping okay...and also, that meant it was almost time for a dinner break. XD

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Category Comics » - Original Comics » - Pages & panels
Date Submitted October 26, 2007, 6:44:32 PM
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Media Ink or markers
Time Taken Not too long. Only one panel. ;)
Reference My memory of the night sky.

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marschiboi on October 27, 2007, 12:09:23 AM

theres nothing wrong with the writing, but look at his cute hands! XD looks like youve been quite keen to have that dinner break ;)
it was a good idea to do these pages with the futur superhero you explaning things :)
you = genius <3

G76 on October 27, 2007, 3:58:11 AM

I thought that was quite ambitious. I was flashing forward in time for a story I didn't know how was going to end. D: There were some moments where I was quite angry with myself for doing that.

I was very keen for that dinner break. First, because we were having pizza and pizza is awesome. And second because I was starting to get really sick of sitting in that chair, hunched over my papers. But mostly because pizza is awesome. XD

<3<3<3

supergirlcomix on October 26, 2007, 2:11:11 PM

But then WHAT?! Love what he did with powers: Pickle jars, running in the nude. (more creative with his powers than I'd be!)I love how he's sitting there. Pose and expression are great. Oh goodness, HOW you leave me hanging!

G76 on October 27, 2007, 3:53:17 AM

I know. XD When I did my 3 allowed submissions I realised I would be ending on a bit of a tease...but that's okay. Helps to interest people in reading the rest.

He is quite creative with his powers...but I think the popular superheroes would laugh at him. :(

Trinity_Fire on October 26, 2007, 2:01:48 PM

What are you calling wonky?? D:< I don't see it. I really don't. (Too busy staring at the awesome pretty sketch lines she can see through his clothes~♥)
And, haha, yes, eating would be nice, haha. :]
I like this page; single panel pages are some of my favorites. Pretty~

G76 on October 27, 2007, 3:49:55 AM

You know...you've got me thinking now that maybe I could just leave everything in it's construction phase. If it did that...I could post nearly three pictures a day! XD I will give that some thought...

Maybe it's just the boxes around the writing that's making it look really wonky to me. It doesn't look straight. :(

And...I had some Pizza Hut. XD Nice.