Christmas for Duke

It could be better. The tree is very irregular and there are way, way, WAY too many ornaments. There's no sense of depth in this drawing either. Like the presents. We must be really lucky to look at the presents and all of them are DIRECTLY facing us. Is Dugan really sleeping? It looks like he's standing up. Reason why? Your picture lacks depth! If he was sleeping for real, You probably would've seen his feet and a little of his head. Otherwise, he's up against the wall. The carpet is ugly, who'd want bright green for a carpet color? No shading, the stars don't look that well placed, and the room looks stark and empty. You said you wanted comments, so here was my constructive criticism. Good luck on future submissions.

the_ramen_noodle

stop doing that!!!!! leave me alone! his name is duke dugan. and yes, hes sleeping. it's snow, not stars. oh, and no one cares about the ornaments. the presents r fine. and my friend has bright green carpet.