Kurobara no Alice

oAo You should totally make a manga/comic. Every time I see crosshatching on sketches, I think the person has great potential to make a comic. MAKE A AOMIC! Excellent sketch!

Can't make comics. x_X Comics and I don't go well together. I suck at composition, and dramatic placement of the frames.

Cross-hatching is a habit. I was taught how to cross-hatch with those art pencils, and now it's stuck with me.

Great job on the roses! It always takes me ages to get them down decently at the VERY least. I really like this picture.
You drew the guy to the upper left (with the monocle) very appealing- but really, so are the other two in this picture!
I love the girl's (or in this case, Alice's) dress, nice and flowy as she is running. I love how you took up as much room on your paper to fill in the details/background so it doesn't seem empty, but very complete.
If you end up coloring it, I'm sure it would really add to the atmosphere. I would really love to see what how you would do it, too. <3

I'd have to redraw this whole thing onto a nicer piece of paper than the scrap paper I used. :P I did just rush through drawing this one so I wouldn't lose the idea.
Coloring would take...forever. =_="

Wow! This is really awesome! I love the line work and the amazing details in this. It's absolutely beautiful. Wonderful job on this and I know this would look totally amazing in color. ^_^