Reaver 21: Title Page

This is the title page to my newest, hopefully to-be-published book, Reaver 21!

Whoo!

Alright, now this story is, in my opinion, a Sci-Fi/Action kind of story based on the freezing blizzard planet called 'Reaver 21'. In this story, a expert group of specialists are called into the only main building on the planet, the 'Vex Center', when the rate of accidents increase and bodies are discovered half-eaten or ripped apart....no accidents that are normal. The group, known as the Nightstalkers, are to explore the depths of the Vex Center and locate the source of the problem...

dun dun DUN!

Well, I shall be posting the story and it's currently finished chapters today. (12/21/07) Tell me your honest and true opinion, I can take tough criticism. Would you actually buy the book if I were to publish it? Anything I need to work on? Tell me your comments, please!