Draw out the Spirit, Draw out the Soul

This is Foreign. Out of my Virtual Reality book (im not done typing yet b/c i got a new comp. and my dad didnt transfer everything). in my book her soul (bottom) and spirit (top) get drawn out.. ^^ you have to read it to find out though. The original is better, but i use a line paper notebook soo, yeah. While I was... away from fanart for that long period of time, I developed 2 styles, one was like great manga artists book 5, and the other is this. I like it better. what do you think?<br />
~Izzy