Ulonna and John Stormcloud

These are a couple of characters that I am working on for a story that I am writing with a couple of friend's of mine. Ulonnna is my own character and I first decided to draw her like this after soming across an ad in a magazine with a similar pose. I thought it gave her the perfect edge. John Stormcloud unfortunately does not belong to me. he is the brainchild of one of the other members making the story. I just asked him for the description and his permission to draw him which he (thankfully)obliged.