a picture of me by LoverOfLife

a picture of me

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this is the seconed time i submitted this picture but i fixed some major things like his arm was messed up in the first one and i did feet in the last one but they sucked i loke this one alot better and am partly glad the other one isnt on the site.
sorry i havent posted any art b4 this one but i jus got a scanner ^_^ i am so happy i hope all my friends see this thats u zakuman,honeypossum,bullsnake,siberian tiger ect.
comments please harsh ones are accepted as long as they are teaching me sumthin not jus like.....this sucks please say y it does and how to correct it

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Category Anime/Manga » - Original art » Characters (Male)
Date Submitted December 6, 2004, 7:36:42 AM
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bewarethetoast on August 11, 2005, 7:50:19 AM

its a good drawing but it seems as though the clothes have got an exrta amount of wrinkles.

Siberian_Tiger on February 11, 2005, 11:28:21 AM

You!!! I got Aim i added you ha >=) Now we can talk, ill meet you on aim sometime, be on dude!! XD!!!

LoverOfLife on December 24, 2004, 11:44:44 PM

i dident think that at all but ur right this isne my best and i have been working hard on a comic that i was gonna poast it ended up bieng 17 pages long but i wasent happy with the quality so i am gonna redo it

Siberian_Tiger on December 15, 2004, 6:34:03 AM

Guess what!! I'll give you some drawing lessons if you wanna get good like all of us here but if you think im saying you suck at drawing and if youre mad at me then thats ok!! O_O i hope i wasnt offensive, anyway i might do it, its up too you

Siberian_Tiger on December 15, 2004, 6:23:22 AM

Yo yo yo extra cool person to comment, lmao no im joking hehehe, well anyway a comment for your drawing w0tt omg thats special isn't it?? Ha well anyway i love the style, i used to draw like that when i was a beginner, but this drawing is sooooo much better, i think everything is perfect for you, except the eyes, theyre too big and too high,put them smaller and lower and he'd be smexy ;) hehe, but its all perfect, btw is that you? haha!! Also, do you have msn or soemthing cause i do, and if you have a picture of yourself, and if you can put it on this site I'll draw you and sawn together if that'll make you really happy! I'd give me something to draw! Well i have to go study,I'll be on this friday and may have a new picture up, i dont know let me think about it, gotta go im out bye bullsnake and honey, saw your pics, really good!! kekekeke~~

Innotech on December 13, 2004, 8:05:49 PM

First of all, thanks for all the comments on my stuff. I appreciate it.
This is pretty good actually. Im no expert, but I see a few things you can improve here.
YOu have proportions down pretty well, so youre almost there already, so the only things I see are slightly misplaced eyes, hands need a little work (they are difficult trust me)and the clothing wrinkles should be realistically folded (thats extremely difficult for me too so just keep practicing it). Other than thosel ittle nitpicks, this is really good work.

LoverOfLife on December 12, 2004, 9:24:51 AM

well i have an explanation about the wrinkles i jus fell down a hill so there!
lol jk thanks for the comments ill do less wrinkles next time

PootPoot on December 7, 2004, 3:03:35 PM

I think the eyes are fine...I personally think the head is the best part...The face looks goood...I agree though,there are a bit too many wrinkles, and the proportions could use some work, but overall this is pretty good. If you look at my gallery, you'll notice I wasn't very good in the beginning, but I've improved. Just keep drawing and you'll keep getting better =)

destructokid on December 6, 2004, 12:59:54 PM

that's awesome!

i think it would look better if you just work on drawing hands,and don't do too many wrinkles,just a few.and 4 comments in 1 day,that's good(even though its only 3 not counting you). hope you draw/post more stuff!^^

LoverOfLife on December 6, 2004, 8:57:45 AM

see these are the comments i want the ones i can learn from thanks u 2

Bullsnake on December 6, 2004, 5:39:04 AM

i wouldn't worry about making it more realistic since you seem to be focusing on the manga/anime style..

perfect realism isn't an issue, and there are so many ways of doing something it's very hard to give any kind of "overnight success" pointers.

Improvement comes with time, especially when you're doing a comic style.Like I said, there are so many ways to do something. I can't explain how I draw a face and expect it to be correct because there are a bajillion other artists who draw a face entirely different. It's tough.

however the numerous lines in the jacket and pants and shirt don't really fit the anime style I think you're going for.

but just work on it, take your time, check the proportions/symmetry by using a mirror or holding the drawing up to a light so you can see the reverse on the back of the paper, study how other people do things.. etc etc.

that's a mouthful..but I was in a typing mood for some reason.

HoneyPossum on December 6, 2004, 1:53:57 AM

Ah, first comment ever!

All in all this isn't as bad as you think it is. The major things to work on are to make it more realistic. For example, the face is a bit round, and the eyes seem a little high.

But, on the plus side, the outfit is done pretty well. There seem to be a lot of wrinkles, but that's just me.

Draw more, and upload it!! ^-^