The Unfinished Cloud (V.1)

Ok ... please nobody point out to me that Mr Strife here seems to be missing several facial features, a foot and an arm. Trust me when i say, i AM aware of this. <br />
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Well anyway im kinda crap at drawing so i am practicing with drawing, not tracing, thats just cheating, the offical artwork. :D<br />
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I started it in my Lunch time at school and it sorta turned out like that and i havent had time to finish it. <br />
ive left the face till last because eyes are one of my worst sections of drawing. <br />
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O.o what do people think ... ? Remember im new at this. dont be too harsh .. *glares* but dont patronise me ..