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My RP character

My RP character by Mean_Princess
My RP character by Mean_Princess

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Mean_Princess
Um... well I'm actually kinda proud of this picture cause it turned out the way I wanted it to, minus a few flaws. Um well it's my RP character. Her name is Shelly (I know I know how original of me -_-) Anyways she's 16 years old, of chinese/Japanese background and is a phychic kinda um... read minds and a Seer aka can see the future. She's an orphan and so far has not been sorted into a house yet. She's stoic, mysterious and keeps to herself. And kinda emotionally unstable at the same time. She's a born-genius but as she's usually quiet and cold, nobody realises this. She doesn't try to make friends as it seems that friends will only be there to hurt her. She doesn't trust anyone or anything but herself. Hm... anyways PLEASE comment! I'll give you a cookie if you do! *holds up a tray of Millie's cookies* =^-~=

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Dreamerz_Angel on August 18, 2004, 10:31:10 AM

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Dreamerz_Angelyeah, i see some things that look a bit off. for one, her chest (breast area) looks a tiny bit bigger than it should be and it would help if you outlined one boot (the one that's more in front) in white or silver so we know where one is and where the other is. but overall, she looks pretty, her eyes are really nice and the shading is great and her hair looks nice, love the shiny-ness!

Mean_Princess on August 18, 2004, 6:41:58 AM

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Mean_PrincessYay some form of comments! Yay! Um... anyways now that I've looked at it I do see quite a LOT more flaws. Firstly being is that her neck, well when I first drew this on paper, you could see her neck was a lot more thicker, but ya'know when I coloured it in Photoshop I had to colour the hair in black cause that's well her haircolour and it just so happens that her hair also covers most of her neck and most of her body, thus making her body seem really small and her head too big. And I know I can't draw wands to save my life! It came out too thick and I'm aware of it but it was the only way I was able to colour it in cause I suck at colouring in detail.... and just to clear it up she was started off leaning on the wall with 1 leg bent but when I was trying to draw this it just made her look like she was going to kick someone, so um... I just draw it so 1 leg was slightly in front of the other, buut you can't really tell, seeing as her boots don't really show that... It's really complicated and such and also her right hand was supposedly before I changed it on the computer, behind her back. so you wouldn't see her arm but it didn't look right when I scanned it thus making me change it. I now also motice her hair is too puffed out and her legs too short and her boots too fake and damnit her neck is just aawful! Please take no notice of her neck ok! <br />
-_-" *sigh* Anyways! Thanks for commenting! ^^ Highly appreciated! Here's a cookie! *hands cookie's out* ^-^

rikuschick on August 18, 2004, 6:35:50 AM

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rikuschickI don't know why we're talking about psychics, but while we're on the subject. I think another word for a mind reader would be a telepathist (I might have not spelled that right) and a person who sees the future is an oracle. And oh yeah, your pic is great. I like her hair, but I think you may have needed to make her shoulders a little wider. The average person's shoulder length is the width of their head, or something like that. And her feet do look kinda weird. But anywayz, sorry for all the criticism (I'm no professional I'll tell you that much) but I really do luv your pic. I like those kind of rays in the backround. Keep it up!! ^_^

DragonicFlames on August 18, 2004, 6:12:46 AM

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DragonicFlamesA mind reader isn't classified as a "psychic", it's classified as a mind reader. A seer, is a person who can see the future and the past by touching objects. A future seer is a Psychic Reader, one who uses each tarots or thier souls/mind to read the future (or the heavens) and makes predictions. As for a mind reader, just like the title says, mind-reader. Now, for some talk on your picture, good use of color, however, the girl's head is slightly bigger than her body so it makes her kind of top heavy. O.o; or atleast that is what I see happening, you know, stiff wind blow by and she goes and falls on her face. o.O; but only i with my evils would notice something like that.

Val on August 18, 2004, 6:04:30 AM

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ValIts really cute!! The only things that bug me are the way she's holding the wand and the way shes standing, kinda looks like shes leaning.