Gale Cresent

hehe... kawaii. I likes how his head is done and the pose is vereh nice. Wao, it looks like everyone puts that stripe on their Z. It's fun. I wonder why FAC doesn't... Anyway, the foot seems a bit oddly curved and more feathers should show up in the wind if they're folded like that and they should be just a bit thinner. That and they're supposed to be on the back but it appears as if they're on the shoulder. You should also be a ble to see just a little bit of the belly. I'm not being mean, just so you don't jump to conclusions. This is how I always comment. Helpfully. Of cource, I'm wasting my time cos no one ever listens or gives a crap. You know, I would kill for a little constructive critisizm on a recent pic I actually tried on, but I don't get any. Am I the only one that wants to improve?

Then you obviously haven't looked at much of my art. I hope god smites you for saying such terrible things! This conversation is over, you are morally hopeless!

Like it!
to my luff: I wanan improve. I'm listning when you say to do paws better T.T