OLD manga practise by Miliath

OLD manga practise

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to go with the afirementioned characters, we have a very old trial page for it, to see if i could do it ok-ish. i think it turned out not too bad... read in manga style, so top-right to bottom left. i don't think it's that clear, can i get some comments on that front? o_O

1: *from phone* D'you want to come to the club tomorrow?
2: I never thought... I never thought she'd ask me...
3: She's beautiful... I really like her. I might even say that I...
4: Angel?
5: *from phone* Are you still there? - How could I say no?
6: I'll be there.

i think i should have made the middle one with sharon on it go all the way across, so it doesn't confuse too much... but meh, i can work something out. comments? ^_^

oh yeah, i left it big so that people can read the writing if they want. cos my handwriting is terrible ;;>_>

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Date Submitted June 12, 2007, 9:50:11 AM
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SpiderMuffin on September 8, 2007, 9:50:19 AM

(I'm bored...)

YOU! I warned you. Proof RIGHT THERE -points- As soon as we go back to actually being able to get a seat on the bus, YOU ARE SOOO OUT OF THE WINDOW. And we sit upstairs. Grrr...XDD XP

SpiderMuffin on June 12, 2007, 7:26:41 AM

Oh it is that XDD Ignore the last part of my last comment then XDD

I still think it's totally awesome...I see what you mean about the middle bit...you should do that. Or maybe merge the Sharon one and the second one into one big one and have the sharon picture sort of faded....If you can do that (I wouldn't know how to XDD) Anyway...I soooo can't wait for you to draw this aaaaaaall...-squeeeeeeal- ^_____^ AND IF YOU SUDDENLY DECIDE YOU CAN'T BE BOTHERED TO DO IT I'LL THROW YOU OUT THE BUS WINDOW NEXT YEAR XDDD

luckylace222 on June 12, 2007, 2:54:07 AM

:D That's really cute.

It's hard to make out the words, but I get the point of him liking her! GREAT JOB!

Miliath on June 12, 2007, 2:56:13 AM

thanks for the comment! ^_^ yeah, it's hard to read the words cos they're in pencil and the rest is in pen. i couldn't be bothered going over the words, so i left it. :3 glad you like it though ^_^

hvite_devil on June 12, 2007, 2:53:26 AM

Aww that's SO cuute! Love how you drew each window on the comic page. lol. It so looks like a real manga!
Love it sooo much! Are you continuing on this manga?? XD
*favs*

Miliath on June 12, 2007, 2:54:47 AM

i drew this about a year or so ago, probably longer, and then spider recently said that i should do it again over the summer. so i probably will, i like it ^_^ it'll give me something to do, too XD but thanks for the comment :D