Draco's "nightmare" (REMAKE!)

Well....IDK if you can read it lols. But yea it's a re-make of something I did last year. I just wanted to see how much I've improves. Quite a damn lot, I'd say. What do you think? The link to the other one can be found here:http://www.fanart-central.net/pic-320902.html

Let me know how much you think I've improved, ya?

put in mild sexual content for all you lovely prudes out there who think that his implications are wrong.