Naruto: ch. 2 pg. 8

Yeah, that's something I'd been wondering about. I've been using Geneva, but it doesn't seem to have to look I want. You have any suggestions?

You are actually quite close right now. Also try changing the font make it more comicy.

Well, that what this comic is. High quality work from me takes time, too much time. I'm getting practice from trying to complete each page in around three hours. So this comic is an excuse to get down and practice nearly every day. I use tracing sometimes as well.

Sakura is closer to the "Camera" in the first panel, and her supernatural strength is causing her muscles to bulge. If it is too much of I problem I can edit it. But yeah expect some things to be off, hopefully after a year or more of doing this I can almost look professional.

Frankly it looks like you rushed it. Sakura looks manly and bigger then Sasuke in the entire page. Take more time try tracing pictures until you learn to draw on your own easily.