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Hoshi

Hoshi

Hoshi by PixieSticks
Hoshi by PixieSticks

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PixieSticks
Eh cant really tell if it look slike her i need some constructive critisism here people if im gonna get any better if you think it sucks why and dont answer with I just dont like star trek

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Category Television » Star Trek series
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PixieSticks on November 15, 2005, 12:02:40 PM

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PixieSticksits from the episode civilizations

cptShort on November 8, 2005, 3:17:27 PM

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cptShortI haven't seen that show in a while, so I don't remember what she looks like exactly. However, some general CC that might help a bit...

I don't recall her lips being quite that large, so if you could decrease them in the vertical sense, that'd probably help.

The bridge of her nose near her eyes is a little thin, bring the shading on the left side of her nose (her right) more left, away from her actual nose to broaden it a bit. Careful not to overdo it.

Last of all, I think you should darken her hair more than that, since it is black. ;)

Hope that helps a little, nice job with her eyes and eyebrows, although I can't tell what the marks above her right (our left) eyebrow are.