Ali
Ali
Ali by Rei_Anul_Sama
Description
Description
The story i have so far in my mind:
"Ali is the third son a two wonderful parents...but his father was dead before Ali took his first breath, and his mother soon followed. His young brother and older (not by much) sister are forced to raise the young boy on their own, as they have no living relatives...at least, none that they know of.
And nows the time most would expect an uncle or aunt to come and claim to be so. Well, not in this story. In this story, it is true that the children have no living relatives, no one to look after them, no one to take them in. All they have is the house their parents left them, and a bit of insurance money. But in this society, no orphan is left un-attended. The neighborhood the three reside in take it upon themselves to help raise the children right.
They do, fortunately, raise the Sunae children right. The eldest, a young, head-strong girl named Kyt, joins the sparse military in hopes of a better life than she shared growing up. The first son, a smart boy named Grae, becomes a respected member of the peaceful government. The second son and third child, Ali, looks up to both of his siblings, hoping to become just like them, a little bit of both. To help his dreams, Kyt teaches Ali how to fight, and Grae teaches him logic and patience.
The young boy didn't realize how important any of that patience would be...until their homeworld is invaded. And so it goes, Kyt, Grae, and Ali Sunae find themselves in the middle of a fight for their homeworld...which doesn't last long. The Kavan homeworld is soon overrun by the invaders, and it becomes quite obvious that these intruders are not there for gold or destruction. The invaders are a trading people...and their trade is flesh."
And that's most of what I've planed, in a nutshell. For more, you'll have to wait until I've actually typed it. But I'm not sure what I'm gonna call it. Probably something like 'Ali Sunae' or 'Slave Trade' or something...or maybe...hmmm...>.< idk...its one in the morning, I'm going to bed. Any title suggestions, please put them in comments:D
-From the Vampire
"Ali is the third son a two wonderful parents...but his father was dead before Ali took his first breath, and his mother soon followed. His young brother and older (not by much) sister are forced to raise the young boy on their own, as they have no living relatives...at least, none that they know of.
And nows the time most would expect an uncle or aunt to come and claim to be so. Well, not in this story. In this story, it is true that the children have no living relatives, no one to look after them, no one to take them in. All they have is the house their parents left them, and a bit of insurance money. But in this society, no orphan is left un-attended. The neighborhood the three reside in take it upon themselves to help raise the children right.
They do, fortunately, raise the Sunae children right. The eldest, a young, head-strong girl named Kyt, joins the sparse military in hopes of a better life than she shared growing up. The first son, a smart boy named Grae, becomes a respected member of the peaceful government. The second son and third child, Ali, looks up to both of his siblings, hoping to become just like them, a little bit of both. To help his dreams, Kyt teaches Ali how to fight, and Grae teaches him logic and patience.
The young boy didn't realize how important any of that patience would be...until their homeworld is invaded. And so it goes, Kyt, Grae, and Ali Sunae find themselves in the middle of a fight for their homeworld...which doesn't last long. The Kavan homeworld is soon overrun by the invaders, and it becomes quite obvious that these intruders are not there for gold or destruction. The invaders are a trading people...and their trade is flesh."
And that's most of what I've planed, in a nutshell. For more, you'll have to wait until I've actually typed it. But I'm not sure what I'm gonna call it. Probably something like 'Ali Sunae' or 'Slave Trade' or something...or maybe...hmmm...>.< idk...its one in the morning, I'm going to bed. Any title suggestions, please put them in comments:D
-From the Vampire
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Category Miscellaneous » Characters » Written Characters » Male
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Category Miscellaneous » Characters » Written Characters » Male
Date Submitted
Views 1059
Favorites... 1
Vote Score 2
Comments
8
Media Other drawing
Time Taken about 30 min to 45 min
Reference Nope, my char^_^
Media Other drawing
Time Taken about 30 min to 45 min
Reference Nope, my char^_^
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Gardian_of_the_shadow_relm on July 15, 2008, 7:49:34 AM
OH...now he pretteh....:3 damn you! why do you make such yummeh chars DX>Rei_Anul_Sama on July 16, 2008, 12:14:09 PM
cuz otherwise no one would like him (he's a whinnie brat)-From the Vampire
Falconlobo on July 6, 2008, 4:56:18 PM
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cool story nice ears tails and hair^^Rei_Anul_Sama on July 7, 2008, 3:01:56 AM
thaaaaaaanks^_^ any title suggestions for the new story?-From the Vampire
Falconlobo on July 7, 2008, 3:04:15 AM
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no one is ever alone?Rei_Anul_Sama on July 7, 2008, 3:33:37 AM
that wouldn't fit, since Ali becomes a slave and Kyt and Grae die. supposedly. or at least Ali believes they're dead.^_^-From the Vampire
Falconlobo on July 7, 2008, 4:23:17 AM
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hmm then i dunoFalconlobo on July 7, 2008, 3:05:08 AM
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I meat nobody^^