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Random Girl 1

Random Girl 1

Random Girl 1 by Remora
Random Girl 1 by Remora

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Remora
Please, I'm here because i want suggestions on how to improve, this is a piece i spent a lot of time on. I tried my hand at shading, but it doesn't look like it came out right...HELP!

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Category Anime/Manga » - Original art » Characters (Female)
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EmmyChan on December 31, 2003, 5:33:10 AM

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EmmyChanWow you've deffinally improved from the drawings I've last seen. But To be honest it might be just my comp but I can't really see any shading...I see a bit around the nose. What might help is if you use a mechanical pencil and make a dark line against the nose and work out from the line just going fairly lighter till you reach about maybe the cheak or so. Also the eyes seem to have a bit of different tones from one another and I think the neck might a bit small...But I'm not sure...sry... Hope I wasn't to critical. But you are imporving keep up the good work!<br />