Chibi Hiniku (changed)

Bleh! I changed Hiniku....<br />
I now remember why I dont come here......Cause just like deviant art nobody comments! >_< Im not prefect I need some critisisim here! Or if you really think this crap is good some encouraging words would be nice too.......<br />
Anyways...im pmsy and I must go devour chocolates.....bye....<br />
Materials: <br />
-Mech 0.7 pencil<br />
-WriteStyle Prisision-XL rollerball pen 0.5<br />
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Time: <br />
sketch- 30/45 min.<br />
color- 30/45 min.