SBSP Doujinshi Page 6
SBSP Doujinshi Page 6
SBSP Doujinshi Page 6 by Rikusgurl
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Description
OKAY... I believe I've crossed the line. I didn't think I would go this far. O___o;;;
Anyways, I went through this too quickly. But I wanted to be able to fit my whole idea of this scene on one piece of paper. The pictures aren't drawn that well, and neither was the dialogue written that well. The worst looking panel is the second to the last. I can't draw someone from behind taking someone else's clothes off. T_T LMAO and in that panel before the 'unbottoning' part, Sponge looks drunk. XD
But, ya know. All in all, it's pretty good.
Seriously, tho. I didn't expect to go that far with them. I can't even imagine what the next page is going to be. -___-` LOL Wonder why Pat left Sponge's tie on? ^^ *giggles* That LAST scene is so smexy... *_* ((droolage))
I hope you all like even though the quality sucks. o_o'
Anyways, I went through this too quickly. But I wanted to be able to fit my whole idea of this scene on one piece of paper. The pictures aren't drawn that well, and neither was the dialogue written that well. The worst looking panel is the second to the last. I can't draw someone from behind taking someone else's clothes off. T_T LMAO and in that panel before the 'unbottoning' part, Sponge looks drunk. XD
But, ya know. All in all, it's pretty good.
Seriously, tho. I didn't expect to go that far with them. I can't even imagine what the next page is going to be. -___-` LOL Wonder why Pat left Sponge's tie on? ^^ *giggles* That LAST scene is so smexy... *_* ((droolage))
I hope you all like even though the quality sucks. o_o'
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Category Cartoons » Spongebob Squarepants » Fan Comics (doujinshi)
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Category Cartoons » Spongebob Squarepants » Fan Comics (doujinshi)
Date Submitted
Views 9358
Favorites... 59
Vote Score 1
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NessaRu on November 22, 2007, 3:23:58 AM
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GoddessOfAllThingsPurple on July 7, 2007, 3:51:22 PM
I haven't been on in like forever but i had to come back and at least look at this, this doujinshi is actually what got me into yaoi so...DOMO ARIGATOphantomangel13 on April 29, 2007, 8:10:16 AM
... XD ~nosebleed~KisaShika on December 12, 2006, 8:53:59 AM
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Oocness Pat! One question before I go inot 'insain yaoi fangirl' mode. When did Pat get slightly smart and so damn seductive? Anywho.AHMUGASH! So cute and sexy! And, yet again, you make Spondge seem so innocent!
RoyallyJenova on October 13, 2006, 4:22:44 PM
LMAO!!!! XDDLS your hilarious!!
That's classic! *wripes tears* XD
LadySymphonia on July 17, 2006, 11:52:21 AM
*tries not to say it*Nananana......PATRICK IS DIRTY DAN AHAHAHAH!
WUAHAHAHAHAHA MUAHAH!!!!!!! I HAD TO SAY IT!
ReixKai42 on October 9, 2006, 11:22:35 AM
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Rikusgurl on October 9, 2006, 11:47:38 AM
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LMFAO THAT appealed to mah sense of humour...! I'm laughing SO hard right now... LOL *ded* Gah... I love you guys. XDDragdoll21092 on July 7, 2006, 5:08:09 AM
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Whoa!Kama on May 10, 2006, 6:45:44 AM
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Omg! I never thought they would make such a great couple in humans form..Well, really nice drawings! This is really cool ^^Lostkitten100 on April 15, 2006, 12:06:39 AM
O_O HAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTCartoonz on April 12, 2006, 8:10:49 AM
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Nope im not cartoon, im her sister. I just have a question, i really like your comic, it's cool. But is Patrick LICKING Spongbob? :p, I am picturing them as someone else. :) your good.Sugar_n_spice on March 17, 2006, 10:18:03 AM
omigosh! >_Odd_xo on March 17, 2006, 4:24:51 AM
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EEEEE! -fangirl nosebleed- I LOVE SPONGEBOB IN THE LAST PANEL~He's so CYUTE! -runs around aimlessly with nose still bleeding-
xxcoconutxx on March 10, 2006, 8:36:42 AM
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i am so glad you didnt do it in original animation....hmmm spongexstar yoai....scary...LuffySP on February 20, 2006, 3:29:22 AM
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*drool* Wait, when did Pat get so smart and seductive?GothicfarieluvinJack on February 2, 2006, 5:41:25 AM
yar *droolage* *wipes up drool* must read next partKitsuneFlamez on January 22, 2006, 2:45:27 AM
OMG... i knew something was happening between the sceans!! those two had somethin' goin on!! i got into this one other comic almost similar but now i'm in to this one too. cool!!^_^Animegirl1994 on December 27, 2005, 12:11:44 PM
I'll admit that I don't like yaoi, but I really like this comic ^-^ Honest! I really it! *faves*Edward_Elrics_girl on December 23, 2005, 1:43:43 PM
Awesome Pic again!! Whoa Pat what are you doing? ?_?' Wow I'm going to read your other Comics! Bye O(^_^)oanimaniac525 on November 29, 2005, 1:35:37 PM
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THE QUALITY DOES NOT SUCK IT'S WAAAAAAAAAAAY BETTER THAN MY WORK!!!!!!!!!RaexBB_4ever on November 8, 2005, 6:16:41 AM
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I never liked Yaoi eigther but i'm liking SP/Pat to.moonandstars on October 23, 2005, 3:06:01 AM
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WWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEE!IM FEELING HAPPY!!!
I AM HIGH ON SUGAR!!!
I WANNA GIVE SOMEONE A HUG!!
Veiwers:*Runs off crying*
shadow_Kat on September 3, 2005, 10:56:49 PM
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It's kinda disturbing, but cool. And the bad thing is.... I can't stop reading!Baby_Girl9168 on August 20, 2005, 6:36:15 AM
GET-R-DONE!!! I LOVE THAT DOUJINSHI I LOVE YOUR ART I LOVE YOU! OK NOT REALY BUT YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!Sakunia on July 23, 2005, 10:00:04 AM
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O___o OH NO!!!DONT TELL ME!!!AHHHHHHHHH LOL*FAVS*
JinLover on July 18, 2005, 8:06:19 AM
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Cool! I think the quality on this is fine! I'd just prefer for the next one not to be rated R. But tat's jus me. Awesomeness!! ^-^ Shaman_Ed on July 17, 2005, 11:41:13 AM
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i have never liked yaoi but i am enjoying this spong/pat yaoi lolKisaki on July 11, 2005, 8:24:14 PM
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Whoah!Like.
Whoaaaaaaaah...
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Marioandluigi on June 23, 2005, 3:38:23 PM
omg i knew they were gay but patrick went too far make more the good parts coming you are my idol.i think you draw the bestKhyleria on June 21, 2005, 7:10:08 PM
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MORE! Dude..Wat do you mean youve gone too far this totally PWNS!!zukoswife on June 21, 2005, 10:47:34 AM
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for one thing,the quality does not suck! it is better than mine is! keep going!(because i think i know where it is going o_____O) do more! bye!I LOVE PRINCE ZUKO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
darkraven89 on June 19, 2005, 4:10:41 PM
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blah blah blah. you don't know what you are talking about. this lookk awsome!!!NOXX on June 4, 2005, 9:35:46 AM
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ooh. shmexy..Sin_san on June 4, 2005, 8:45:36 AM
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And so it eats my review -.- ehm. Yeah. I just went on about how it was good XD and stuff. And how if you needed encouragement, you can e-mail me again =3 it would be fun to discuss this!! Welp X3 take care. I'm on the way to check out your other updates. *wavehug*Sin_san on June 4, 2005, 8:43:58 AM
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IT'S SIN O.O; From E-mail. DEAR GOD THIS PWNS MY SOCKS XD I knew it was gonna be good when you first told me about it yum_pop on June 3, 2005, 11:25:13 PM
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awwwwwwwww! there soooo cute 2gether =^-^=
skibalovesya on June 1, 2005, 10:47:05 AM
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GAHHHHH! *dies* w00tness to the max, Rikusgurl, I swear to the Force, you are so brilliant(ly awesome)!!! *stares at Sponge's eyes on the bottom panel* So prettyyyyy...Hehehe... I smell hentai... X3
redkitsune15 on June 1, 2005, 5:38:05 AM
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yay! the next page is up!..and woo! go pat! what a naughty boy! this is great!can't wait to see the next page! and because i'm so damn lazy, i'll also say that your jenny and brad pic is awesome! those two are so cute together...but i'm lazy so i'm putting that commment here! keep up the grea work! Viva La Rikusgurl!PikaPal101 on May 31, 2005, 6:26:23 PM
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MORE! This is... so hot, and... MORE! xD Please? *Gives you a cookie* Hott... ^^ *Giggle*mikoa on May 31, 2005, 8:59:08 AM
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Patrick???? what the hell are you doing?!! Rikusgurl on May 31, 2005, 8:37:27 AM
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Yeah, Pat DOES love Sponge back, but not in that 'sweet' kind of way the Sponge likes him. He's definately not using him by any means, though. He really has a thing for him. It's just... I don't think he's gonna tell SB that. ^^ I think he's gonna take SB's route and better yet 'show' him. lol I dunno. We'll just have to wait and see, now won't we? ^_^' Hehe... I crack myself up. O__o;; **ignore me and my stupidness**orchid on May 31, 2005, 8:34:53 AM
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woah.........i wanna see what happens next! o____Oshaman_girl on May 31, 2005, 7:32:30 AM
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this is hot O___O continue please !!Icantdrawbutilltry on May 31, 2005, 6:09:13 AM
>_< man i want to know i love it!! :3 *kisses sb and pat* :3 >_
dragons_healing_blood on May 31, 2005, 3:00:45 AM
That's lots better than I could ever do, so don't beat yourself up about it. I really lke the idea of that coupling, i never would have thought of that. And what is with Patrick, does he love SpongeBob back, or is he only going to use him? And yes that last scene IS quite smexy.Knuczema on May 31, 2005, 2:39:58 AM
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*gets shot before she can say anything*the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on May 31, 2005, 12:12:13 AM
woof you pat!! go pat take it all off sponge!! HAHAHAHAHEHEHEHAHA!the-punk-rock-girl-lives-stupi on May 31, 2005, 12:08:47 AM
THIS IS SO ASSOME I WAS LIKE WAITING FOR THE 6TH PAGE THINGY TO COME OUT WHOOT but it waz a bad idea for me to click it when my moms in the room even though she didn't see still bad idea for me.THE PIC IS SO CUTE!!!!!!!!!!!!! AWWW I LOVE IT SO MUCH FAV!!!!!
*shoves cookie down throut*HAVE A COOKIE HAVE ALL ZA COOKIES FOR A KICK @$$ GOOG JOB!!!*shoves 50000,00000,0000 cookies down throut plus a muffin* ^____^
i'm done still good jub loves it
Kurama_Lover_Otaku_Bunny on May 30, 2005, 11:50:40 PM
Ooooooh yes...I'm tinging with anticipation. Crossing the line is always fun!! *go fer it, Pat!!*
Fallen_Angel83 on May 30, 2005, 4:55:58 PM
Oooooo....Finally it's up!! XD I can't wait 4 the next page cause it's getting good!!!!imprisoned-dreamer on May 30, 2005, 4:00:01 PM
first comment YES! ohh this is getting so GOOD *grabs popcorn and Dr Ppr* oh yeah...
Wowewowe...O///O
*Reaches down for another one and notices only one is left from the whole 30 cookies*
...OwahahuhHUH?! O___o