Ninian

Hi there. :) Yay Ninian! I like it, I think it is good for a first try. My suggestion is to read some anatomy books...and for backgrounds, make them lighter than the character so the viewer's focus doesn't wander or is skewed. Nin's dress seems to be lost with the dark grass around it. Anyway keep drawing Fire Emblem!! :)

Yeah, I noticed that too. Arms, poses and outlines are something I need to work on.

Thanks for the comment!

Ah, a Ninian drawing ! ^_^

So, it's your first attempt ? Not bad at all. I particularly like the shading of the colours, especially for the sky and the grass. You kinda have a painting-like styke, don't you ? The shades of colours are pretty, especially for the backbround.

I hope you won't take it the wrong way, but... I think you could make the outlines more wavy, otherwise her arms or clothes could seem stiff. (and it there is wind, then, they are all the more wavy)

But this was not bad at all, particularly for a first attempt. Please, keep up the good work.


Lord Ma-koto

You did well! I hope you keep practicing! I'm sure you will become a very good artist!

Thank you! ^^

But...you know what, we're all a work in progress, keep it up, and it took guts to put it up too, so, your a great person with great determination ^_^