Xoe & Feill by SethsRazorbladeBitch

Xoe & Feill

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Feill, with the long hair, isn't mine. He belongs to a friend on DA.<br />
This was part one of her birthday gift ^^ I'm not happy with it, so I did a part two. I dispise the shading...<br />
Drawn in .7mm lead.<br />
Comments? Questions?

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N♂♂

Category Anime/Manga » - Original art » Couples/Pairings » Yaoi
Date Submitted September 13, 2005, 1:45:48 PM
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Andieh on October 5, 2005, 11:49:10 AM

Good. ^^ I just have some tidbits of critique, if you don't mind much ...

The shading is way off. It looks greasy, almost ... try shading wherever there is an overlap. It makes things a lot easier. Also, their anatomy is like a girl's ... dA has TONS of tutorials on how to draw. Check them out. ^^

Good luck, and I look foward to seeing improvements in your art!

Rataiga on September 14, 2005, 5:52:03 AM

They have a little too much hip, and the shading's a needs some work. Otherwise, this is good ^^