Joyride (for fanfic)

Okay, this is for another chapter in my fic. If you I could draw a car I would, so it would make the fic pic more comprehendable, but I can't, so I won't. Anywhos, I got a couple great ideas for two new chapters in the fic (YES I'm almost finished with Chapter 1!) One thing I know for sure, the main character and Shiv are so totally gonna be annoying Hotstreak to death. Hehe. But I digress. Please tell me what you think! ^_^