My First Kurama

watch de series to get a feel of how kurama, and/or hiei's hair, eye's, etc react to certain conditions! and instead of the nose you have draw a triangle on its side (it helps alot, and easy to do!) ^.~ and as kimaera said practice makes perfect! take a look at other artist's work and see what there doing to make ther pics have detail keep practicing! to tell you the truth I found a pic i had done about a year ago of sailor moon and another of well me trying to do one of those 'sailor blah, blahs' and I had a chance to re-do de pic and it turned out abosolutly awsome! maybe good enough to post! well dat is another thing there try re-doing pics dat might you might have had a good idea but just needed a little expereince keep trying' ok i've probebly took up to much of your time already so bye!

Very good for a first attempt at drawing him. My suggestion would be to add more details, especially with the hair. Keep practicing your drawing skills as well. Practice make perfect. =^_^=