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Remus

Remus

Remus by Siriuslyconfused1

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Siriuslyconfused1
This is supposed to be Remus, This is my first work so please don't be to harsh. Tips greatly appreciated.

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Category Books » Harry Potter series » Characters & Fanart » - All Characters » Remus Lupin
Date Submitted
Views 1437
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Comments 3
Media MS Paint
Time Taken 10 minutes
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kerrigan188 on August 25, 2006, 6:11:19 AM

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kerrigan188Whoop whoop.

Okay, first thing: I think you should try pencil sketches. It's way better to help better your skills. Then, there's his hair. You remembered that the hair isn't all one color! Good job! But, hair doesn't simply sit on top of the head. The roots of the hair go behind the ears and all the way to the back of the neck as well. As for the shoulders/arms, they're not too bad, but there's so little space between the arms and the chest that it looks as though his arms might fall off. Try making the arms near the shoulder wider, or

Overall, very cute picture. I love Remus and his wolf ears of doom. (Though you might want to give him regular ears, but that's just a matter of opinion) :D

Siriuslyconfused1 on October 5, 2006, 7:02:04 AM

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Siriuslyconfused1It's funny because now after doing pencil sketches, while I still can't do it on paint, I not realize how to do the hair right and this looks so odd now. Thanks for the comment

sexay on August 16, 2006, 9:20:17 AM

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sexaycute:D