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Page one by Takahashi2Oki
Page one by Takahashi2Oki

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Takahashi2Oki
Just a trial.

Have not thought up a name for it yet or drawn the cover page so I'll prolly go back back delete this and submit it in order.

Also I may change the last panel since two background kind of shots seem a bit much...

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Category Comics » - Original Comics » - Pages & panels
Date Submitted
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Media Other digital art
Time Taken forever
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ExMile on January 10, 2010, 7:10:32 PM

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ExMileIf you put some dialog or something in one of the b.g shots it might help...however they don't feel like background shots so I think it's okay so long as there aren't panels like that every page ^^ .

scooter_girl_Haruko on January 10, 2010, 11:05:09 AM

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scooter_girl_HarukoI don't think you should change it~ Looks great to me! xD