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Reqrium for the Lonesome

Reqrium for the Lonesome

Reqrium for the Lonesome by TheGameArtCritic
Reqrium for the Lonesome by TheGameArtCritic

Description

Description
TheGameArtCritic
In the night, the moon a faded glow,
A puzzled hedgebat looks on with woe.
Into the water of his own abyss,
he looks and wonders, why no bliss?
Why was he lost in mind and soul?
Why was he losing himself in a dark hole?
A hole in his heart, forged out of rage.
Anger forever lasting, forging a cage
to trap his true self, replacing it with this:
a shadowy being, oh so monsterous!
It knows nothing of love, or happiness, or delight.
It looks upon it's enemies, and soon, it shall smite!
And so forever, the hedgebat it led on a path,
Like a dog on a chain, his master is wrath.
He wishes it not be like this,
he musn't harm his friends...
but as we all know, and as all wise men say;
in a matter of time, it depends...

General Info

General Info
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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Characters (OC's) » Hybrids
Date Submitted
Views 1563
Favorites... 2
Vote Score 4
Comments 73
Media Colored Pencil / Crayon
Time Taken 3 days
Reference none

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Zukoinferno on September 12, 2008, 11:03:27 AM

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Zukoinfernoperfect: but mindless killing is FUN!!!

angie: just like MAN-HUGS!
vamp: i hate man-hugs

TheGameArtCritic on September 12, 2008, 1:15:41 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *BRAIN SNAPPAGE* YOU THINK MINDLESS KILLING IS FUN?????? YOU THINK IT'S GREAT TO HOSPITALIZE THE ONLY PERSON IN THE WORLD THAT ACTUALLY CARED WHETHER YOU LIVED OR DIED???????? YOU THINK IT'S AWESOME TO SCARE OFF THE PERSON YOU LOVED BECAUSE YOU COULDN'T CONTROL YOUR ANGER???????!!!!!!!!!! YOU F***ING F****T!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU'RE LUCKY TO HAVE ANGIE, BECAUSE I'M SURE SHE LOVES YOU VERY VERY MUCH, NO MATTER WHAT YOU DO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *breaks down sobbing*

Me: wooooooaaaaaaahhhhh.... ok... just.... explosion.... er.... explination is this: he scared off Rosette when he killed Mr. Inderretta because, even though she hates the badger, she hates mindless killing even more, and seeing Eclipse killing him like that WILLINGLY was just too much for her.

Eclipse: *emo sob*

Zukoinferno on September 13, 2008, 5:31:40 AM

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Zukoinfernoperfect: yup ^^

angie: sorry eclipse, its iblis talking not zuko. thats why i give him a pwnage every now and then.
perfect: what? *lungs get blocked by angies magic* *general grievous cough* you are SO lucky he loves you
angie: damn right.
vamp: O_o my God, she's scary...

TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 6:03:21 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: that's that's all she does.... she fights back... Rosette ran away from me...

Me: Mr. Inderretta may not have beaten you physically, but he definetally beat you MENTALLY.

Zukoinferno on September 13, 2008, 9:28:55 AM

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ZukoinfernoperfectL now now! lets not get upset cause your life is starting to look like a romeo and juliet cop-off! you've always got your emo to keep you company! HAHAHA!!

me: yet another low blow -.-

TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 11:57:01 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: yah shouldn't have done that.

Eclipse: *punches Perfect in the nose (if he has a nose, if not, where the nose should be)*

Zukoinferno on September 14, 2008, 1:49:36 PM

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Zukoinfernoperfect: *rubs blood* aww, did our already unstable psyche get a boo-boo?

me: wtf am i gonna do with him?

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 1:52:30 PM

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TheGameArtCriticme: you are going to -

Condemned: INTERRUPTION!!!!

me: to -

Condemned: INTERRUPTION!!!!

me: TO -

Condmned: BLAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHH!!!!!

Me: I HATE THIS STUPID SPLIT PERSONALITY THING!!!!

Eclipse: what?

Me: ARRRRRRGH!!!!

Zukoinferno on September 16, 2008, 10:23:19 AM

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Zukoinfernoganon: *finishes for you* Die.

me: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUZ!!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 1:25:25 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: I still don't get it. *FALLS DOWN SORTA DEAD*

Me: NUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!!!!!

Zukoinferno on August 22, 2008, 2:16:06 PM

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Zukoinfernozuko: i rest my case.

me: wel done on the poem! and awesome job on the coloring! best art EVAR!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 3:14:41 AM

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TheGameArtCriticTHENK YOOOOOOOUUUUUUUU!!!!

Eclipse: case? What case? You've said nothing!

Zukoinferno on August 23, 2008, 6:29:34 AM

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Zukoinfernozuko: you hate being this way
Vamp the Vamp-Hedgecoyote (kie-o-tee): *drakoola accent* hm. you know, that guy is a-pretty lonely. ve should, ask him to join our collective

Zukoinferno on August 23, 2008, 8:17:32 AM

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Zukoinfernovamp: save your rage for another fight, brother eclipse. those things only work on human vampires. *hugged by you* ... hello there?
zuko: yes you do

TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 8:49:56 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: no i DON'T! grrrr.....

Me: *cuddly* hiiiiiiiii....

Zukoinferno on August 23, 2008, 10:29:15 AM

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Zukoinfernozuko: then why were you feeling so miserable?
vamp: hm. she thinks i am sexy when i am not even drawn yet. interesting.
me: thats one way to put it XDDD

TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 1:59:31 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: dude. *huuuuuuuuuugz* ALL vampires are smexy...

Eclipse: SHUT UP! I WAS UPSET BECAUSE.... *trying to find excuse* because..... um.....

Me: YOU PHAIL.

Zukoinferno on August 24, 2008, 12:52:50 AM

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Zukoinfernozuko: AHA!!! I SO KNEW IT!!!! *pointy+arm flail*
vamp: if you really must know, eclipse, i ofered you to join our collective not as one of me, but as ann equal. we call our group "The Moonlitstalkers" (and im wearing a buckled coat, buckled pants, messy hair, a pony tail, and a cross)

me: he does XD

TheGameArtCritic on August 24, 2008, 2:56:01 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: excuse me as a sit down in this corner and "squee" to myself.... :DDDDDD

Eclipse: no. no more groups. The last group i joined (Hybrid Nation) was a group of psychos who only PITIED me... I plan to kill them all...

Zukoinferno on August 24, 2008, 3:57:15 AM

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Zukoinfernovamp: the moonlitstalkers do not show pity. we only show supiriority to the weak. first and foremost, greedy, power-hungry tycoons such as Cortanda. *to you* are you always like this around-as you say-"emo idols".

Note: vamp isnt emo. deep down he is in fact the very opposite of emo. he just dresses like one to match his dark background, and cause i think it makes him look badass. hes also an inderetta (i had him take the test XDDD).

TheGameArtCritic on August 24, 2008, 4:08:44 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: roflmao! XD

Eclipse: no. I won't join any groups. I am a loner.

Me: .... right now....

Eclipse: no! Shut up! I will stay this way always!

Me: you LIE.

Zukoinferno on August 24, 2008, 8:15:15 AM

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Zukoinfernovamp: i will respect your decision. you may avoid us, you may try to smite us, or you may... oh, what am i carrying on about? its your choices to make in life. so make the most of them. *starts to walk away, but stops* oh. and if you stay this way any longer, you may think of suicide. so learn to control your emotions instead of them feeding on you. before its too late. *disappears into a fog as if he wasnt there* *barely hear it* save yourself.

me: *brrrr!* How the hell does he do that?
voice: i dont
me: *spins around* WHOA, WTF!?! *no one there* *gulp*

TheGameArtCritic on August 24, 2008, 8:29:50 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: only when i was NOT fueled by rage did i think suicidal thoughts... I am free now...

Me: creepy vampirism is still smexy.

Zukoinferno on August 25, 2008, 6:57:38 AM

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Zukoinfernovoice: im not even drawn yet.
me: GAAAHH!!! im NEVER gonna get used to that

TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 7:21:59 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: i wiiiiiiiiillllllllllllll.....

Eclipse: *freezes the air around everyone*

the air: *is now harder to move through, and so freaking cold*

Me: WTF????

Eclipse: I will catch you, vampire...

Zukoinferno on August 25, 2008, 9:39:20 AM

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Zukoinfernovamp: you cannot catch the immortal, brother eclipse. even if you did, you cannot kill me. no one can. i am cursed to live forever, haunting this world as a wretched miserable cur. like yourself.

me: *frozen*
zuko+angie: *cuddled up with zuko as a natural heater* <3

TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 9:55:43 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *growls at the sign of affection* i HATE love...

Me: -_-

Zukoinferno on August 25, 2008, 10:34:06 AM

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Zukoinfernovamp: why would you hate something essential? without love, there can be no hate. and without hate, no love. nothing would happen. you would have remained the same. you would not even have been born. so dont hate it. just avoid it.

zuko+angie: *snuggly* ^^

TheGameArtCritic on August 25, 2008, 11:21:52 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: i don't really care. Your stupid old mumbo jumbo talk will always be ignored by me. I will ALWAYS hate seeing two happy couples... I will ALWAYS try to destroy them... ALWAYS... *hands seemingly grasp nothing untill a balls (lol) of dark energy swils around them*

Me: HEY!!! NO!!!!

Zukoinferno on August 29, 2008, 8:33:09 AM

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Zukoinfernovamp: dont try it. you will regret it.

zuko+angie: ???

TheGameArtCritic on August 29, 2008, 9:16:05 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *suddenly stops, wide eyed. He is shocked with a bajillion volts of dark energy and crumples to the ground, unconcious, and not breathing*

Me: he's having a forced heart failure, caused by Sonic Unleashed's rp with Mish.

Zukoinferno on August 29, 2008, 9:31:48 AM

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Zukoinfernovamp: told him

Zuko+angie: double ???

TheGameArtCritic on August 29, 2008, 10:06:15 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: he's DYING.

Zukoinferno on September 1, 2008, 3:35:13 AM

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Zukoinfernovamp: *to himself* hm... should i?

angie: OMG WE NEED TO GET HIS HEART GOING!!! *takes out fuggin huge shock things outta no where* CLEAR!!! *WHAM*
zuko: angie, he's just going to try to kill you when he gets better

TheGameArtCritic on September 1, 2008, 4:30:01 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: i.... actually have a better solution then killing him with those things... Inderretta will be of use. His skills in the medical terms can save many lives.

Eclipse: *some of his fur is now a little burnt from the shock thingies*

Zukoinferno on September 2, 2008, 8:46:20 AM

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Zukoinfernome: whats he gonna do? give him another "vaccine" from the comic? :P

angie: we're gonna have to do mouth to mouth repiratory then.
zuko: OH, NO U DONT!!! *snatches her away*

TheGameArtCritic on September 2, 2008, 8:53:32 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: no. It actually DOES require Feral.

Eclipse: *small fire starts on his chest fluff fur thingy*

Me: *WATER DUUUUUUUUUUUUMP*

Zukoinferno on September 2, 2008, 1:36:06 PM

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Zukoinfernome: i can see where this is going

zuko: oh, come ON! it was a perfectly good fire!
angie: eclipse was on fire and you were worry about the fire?

TheGameArtCritic on September 2, 2008, 2:55:56 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: well then - what do you think shall happen, hmmm? *one eyebrow raise*

Zukoinferno on September 3, 2008, 10:50:20 AM

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Zukoinfernome: i think he will become immortal and can only be cured by a rare herb thats VERY bitter

vamp: *bares a fang* shall i?

TheGameArtCritic on September 5, 2008, 10:14:49 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: no need. I return.

Rosette: SQUEE!!!!

Eclipse: ... I'm sorry Rosette... i was being an idiot...

Me: a STUBBORN, HOTHEADED idiot.

Eclipse: -_-; not helping...

Me: srry *sheepish grin*

Eclipse: what i have done was unforgivable... will you please forgive me?

Rosette: well -

Eclipse: you can be mad! You can just pretend to forgive me! I'll take it! I will!

Rosette: Eclipse... listen... I DO forgive you... you were just tricked. It happens...

Eclipse: my god, you're patient...

Rosette: it's one of my strengths :D

Me: wow. Eclipse you just beat Knuckles on the record of "most gullible".

Eclipse: *smiles sweetly, then punches my face in*

Me: dat hurth! Ah-und youh thipped muh tooth!

Eclipse: woo.

Zukoinferno on September 6, 2008, 7:01:45 AM

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Zukoinfernoangie: ZOMG HES RANDOMLY BACK!!!!!!! *glomp* WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEge!!!!!!!!!
zuko: its about time too.
vamp: this make no sense

me: i take it this is official?

TheGameArtCritic on September 6, 2008, 7:30:33 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: yes. Weegee.

Eclipse: awesome. Also, I still have that chip in my head and i need to take this extra, unwanted anger out on someone.

Rosette: *hides*

Eclipse: well not you...

Rosette: :D

Zukoinferno on September 9, 2008, 9:38:49 AM

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Zukoinfernozuko: *goes perfect uncontrollably* why not me? ill be your sparring partner/punchbag any time!

me: nah, we can get emerl to be the punchbag XDDDD

TheGameArtCritic on September 9, 2008, 10:07:23 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: lol reference.

Eclipse: it's fine. I need a pre-evolved mouse, or something.

Me: MOUSE! *gives him a mouse*

Eclipse: *crushes the mouse automatically*

Me: D: mousy....

Zukoinferno on September 10, 2008, 9:08:53 AM

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Zukoinfernoperfect: good. NOW GO FOR THAT PANTS WEARING RAT (whose legacy is fading day by day)!!!!!

angie: but i love the pants wearing rat!
perfect: do i have to remind you this is an RP?
angie: oh, ok.

TheGameArtCritic on September 11, 2008, 1:08:01 PM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: uh... no. I'm not hurting someone i know.

Me: *gets out a crosseyed hobo*

Hobo: eh.

Eclipse: *kills the hobo*

Zukoinferno on August 25, 2008, 6:58:57 AM

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Zukoinfernovamp: im also shirtless

mechadragon13 on August 24, 2008, 10:17:46 AM

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mechadragon13all of HN: HEY!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 7:01:00 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *wooden stake* don't try it. AND I DON'T HATE TO BE THIS WAY! SHUT IT, ZUKO!!!

Me: vampire! VAMPIRE!! *hugs Vamp*

SpiralDemon on August 24, 2008, 6:42:14 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on August 24, 2008, 1:37:37 PM

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TheGameArtCritichooray!

i mean... i'm sorry it made you CRY but... um... tissue? *hands you one*

SpiralDemon on August 25, 2008, 12:22:43 AM

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mechadragon13 on August 23, 2008, 3:35:50 AM

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mechadragon13...........whoooooa.............. that poem had me more entranced than Myria looking me right in the eye!!!!! thats was beautiful.... sad, but beautiful..........

the pic is great too. see? we told you coloring it would make it better.

TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 4:19:24 AM

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TheGameArtCriticdahhh.. the coloring was pure shoot...

I liked the poem too, though! I thank you for the compliments! :D

I like your Myria/Poem comparison... XD

mechadragon13 on August 23, 2008, 4:49:06 AM

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mechadragon13no, MY coloring is shoot. yours is AWESOME.

and it's true!! that poem practically made me cry.....

TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 4:58:26 AM

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TheGameArtCriticdid it? It was so late at night when i banged out these words on a keyboard...

mechadragon13 on August 23, 2008, 5:17:27 AM

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mechadragon13you must be inspired by the late hours, then XD

TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 6:00:39 AM

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TheGameArtCriticlol! Maybe.....

I always seem to do my best work when i'm tired and delusional...

mechadragon13 on August 24, 2008, 10:15:56 AM

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mechadragon13haha!! i draw better after i eat. and i eat a LOT.

SONICXROUGELUVA on August 23, 2008, 6:25:27 AM

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SONICXROUGELUVAnow THAT is AWEZOME!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 7:01:13 AM

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TheGameArtCriticthank you.

FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEnd on August 23, 2008, 6:42:47 AM

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FuguethatPlaysatWorldsEndIt's… rather emo… 

Nice poem though…

TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 6:59:40 AM

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TheGameArtCriticthank you ^^

It's SUPPOSED to be emo :P

Falconlobo on August 23, 2008, 6:40:56 AM

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Falconlobonice shading and colors

ShadzGirl on August 23, 2008, 2:34:16 AM

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ShadzGirlAww...he looks so sad...Great poem!

Strike:What is up with you?!He's EVIL!!!

Me:Doesn't mean he can't be cute!

TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 3:13:50 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: yes!

Eclipse: *stares down at the water, and watches the ripples form off his shoe*

Me: thank you for the compliment ^^

ShadzGirl on August 23, 2008, 3:19:14 AM

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ShadzGirlNo prob!By the way,are we ever gonna finish that battle!?!?STRIKE HAS GOTTEN ON MY LAST NERVE ABOUT IT,AND IT'S REALLY AGITATING!!!!!

Strikes:*grins slightly*Opps.Not.

Me:Opps my tail!Ya know,just for once I 'd like Eclipse to beat up Strike!

TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 3:26:52 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *not ooking away from the water, he chuckles a bit*

Me: lol he totally heard you.

ShadzGirl on August 23, 2008, 6:00:44 AM

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ShadzGirlGood!

Tala777 on August 23, 2008, 4:51:52 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on August 23, 2008, 4:57:26 AM

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TheGameArtCriticthank you for the fave!