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Haine Al Alar

Haine Al Alar

Haine Al Alar by TheGameArtCritic
Haine Al Alar by TheGameArtCritic

Description

Description
TheGameArtCritic
You know, if he stopped snarling, he could be as good looking as Knuckles.

Yes, those are tatoos on his his head.

and arm.

yeah.

__________________________

This is Haine Al Alar, a.k.a., Condemned. Stripped from his body, Condemned didn't know what to do. He wandered the world for a century before he found out he could possess people, and feed off their anger and hatred.

Of course, it's hard to find someone who is weak-willed, but strong willed ENOUGH to allow full control for Condemned without the host dying from the pressure.

Dying, or going insane.

Over more and more centeries, Condemned became feared by those who know of him, like psychics, and other creatures of the supernatural.

Most of his hosts consisted of terrosists, insane asylum residents, and tyrants. Almost every one of them died within three years with Condemned.

or went crazy.

This is because of the natural toxins that are kept within the dark spirit. When he resides within a host, the toxins are released, causing extreme irritability, depression, insanity, and when COndemned has accomplished full control of the host, memory loss of the moments when COndmned was present.

it's actually quite a miracale that Eclipse is still alive from such long expostion to the toxic gas.

-- Mr. Inderretta, Condemned/Demakarr notes, september 6

General Info

General Info
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Category Comics » Sonic the Hedgehog » Fan Characters (OC's) » Echidnas
Date Submitted
Views 1390
Favorites... 3
Vote Score 3
Comments 68
Media Graphite pencil
Time Taken 45 minutes
Reference none

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Zukoinferno on September 14, 2008, 5:11:58 AM

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Zukoinfernolol he looks kinda like altair

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 5:26:02 AM

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TheGameArtCriticROFL!

HAINE! YOUR BROTHER IS IN THE WAY! KILL HIM!

Haine: okay! :D

Zukoinferno on September 14, 2008, 1:50:28 PM

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ZukoinfernoO.o kind creepy...

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 2:00:26 PM

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TheGameArtCriticme: how so?

Haine: yeah, how so?

Condemned: yeah, how so?

Condemned and Haine: *look at each other* ZOMG TIME PARADOX!!! *both heads explode*

Zukoinferno on September 14, 2008, 2:35:53 PM

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Zukoinfernoum, condemned doesnt have a head.

zuko: this is getting weird, lets go angie. Angie?
angie: *is drolling over Hain* 8D

TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 9:11:44 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: condemned DOES have a head!

Haine: *dead* STOP STARIIIIING!!

Zukoinferno on September 16, 2008, 10:17:40 AM

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Zukoinfernoangie: 8D
me: i thought it was just a spectamonial plasma ghost thing

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 12:15:59 PM

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TheGameArtCriticit.... was..... kinda........ DAMNIT! STOP MAKING MY BRAIN HURT!

Condemned: yeah!

Zukoinferno on September 16, 2008, 1:57:51 PM

Zukoinferno on
Zukoinfernome: A-HA!! I OWN YOU NOW!!!
zuko; whadda gonna do? inject us with stupid juice?

TheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 9:33:48 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: yes.

Condemned: if a door is ajar, then what makes a jar? This sentence is true: I'm lying.

Zukoinferno on September 22, 2008, 10:50:56 AM

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Zukoinfernome: actually he kinda looks like predator...

zuko: ......... *gets in his face* WHAT THE F**K ARE YOU SAYING!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

TheGameArtCritic on September 22, 2008, 11:14:21 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: I'm saying the truth, but all truths are a lie, but if they are secretely a lie, then what are they truly, or lyfully?

Me:... wha...?

Condemned: The cake is a lie.

Zukoinferno on September 23, 2008, 10:29:24 AM

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Zukoinfernome: oh, God. another inner demon with a sense of humor-.-
vamp: makes sense to me
zuko: WHA- HUH!?!?!?!?!?!1/

TheGameArtCritic on September 28, 2008, 1:47:23 PM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: I'm done now.

Me: GOOD.

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 6:24:06 AM

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mechadragon13Me: dude, the knux comment is SOOOO on target XD

Twilight+Scorch: O.O!!!!!
FRia: O.O (no effing way that condemned was an echidna..... Especially not a blue one........)

Me: COLOR IT!! 8D

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 6:32:16 AM

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TheGameArtCriticnah. I'll just draw another awesome pic of him and color THAT.

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 6:42:05 AM

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mechadragon13Me: SWEET!!!!!!!

Fria: *angry face*
Scorch+Twilight: O.O!!!!!!

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 6:49:22 AM

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TheGameArtCriticEclipse: *with Condemned talking through him* what's wrong? You don't like what species i am? Are you being racist?

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 7:46:11 AM

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mechadragon13Fria: (no it's not that. we just feel disgusted by the fact that we are even remotely[i/] related to you.)
Scorch: you disgrace the name of echidnas everywhere.
Twilight: even the hybrids.

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 7:50:57 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: *laughs* you think i give a damn?

Me: Condemned? Why is Eclipse surviving your toxic gases for so long? Shouldn't he have fallen apart by now?

Condemned: i actually don't know the answer to that... his death is hard for me to read...

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:01:03 AM

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mechadragon13Me: whoops! too many italics XD

twilight: you talk about death as if it were nothing....
Scorch: but how is eclipse surviving those toxins?

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 8:02:50 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCOndemned: i already told you... i don't know... how many years has it been? It's so hard to keep track...

Me: i actually don't know that, myself...

Condemned: maybe it's because he is the son of The Ultimate Lifeform?

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:10:20 AM

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mechadragon13Scorch: could be a possibility...... HOLD IT!!! are we having a nonviolent conversation vith condemned??? HOLY S---!!!

Twilight+fria+Me: *facepalm*

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 8:36:33 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: *raises an eyebrow* oh! Heheheheheh... oh i know now...

Me: know what...?

Condemned: when his body will finally give out...

Me: D8

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 8:40:38 AM

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mechadragon13Everyone: O.O;;;

Me: do we wanna know?

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 8:50:52 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: i don't know. I'm not a mind reader. I know it's SOON though... a shame I'll have to search for another victim...

Me: D8

mechadragon13 on September 14, 2008, 9:34:06 AM

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mechadragon13Me: oh HELL no. you are NOT going to kill eclipse.

Twilight: that hedgebat is our FRIEND! do you think we'll let you get away with it that easily??

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 11:59:02 AM

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TheGameArtCriticCondemned: you think i WANT him to die??!! It's not MY fault his body is so weak to toxins!

Me: ... i don't know how to break the news to the guy... when will he die?

Condemned: the anniversary - his and my birthday.

Me: D8

mechadragon13 on September 15, 2008, 7:33:23 AM

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mechadragon13Me: O.O NO. EFFING. WAY.

Twilight: *to critic* AND YOU'RE JUST GONNA LET HIM DO IT????? HOW COULD YOU????!!!
Scorch: f--- this s---, man, this sucks horribly.
Twilight: .... you swear too much. WHAT HAPPENED TO THE HAPPY????
Scorch: it went poof ^^
Fria: *facepalm* (thats totally beside the point.....)

TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 9:11:08 AM

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TheGameArtCriticme: everything i do is unexpected. Don't blame me, Twilly. My characters have developed minds of their own. Just. Like. You. I don't think we should tell Eclipse though... his last few days would become MISERABLE... let's make those days his best...

mechadragon13 on September 15, 2008, 11:30:21 AM

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mechadragon13Me: b-b-but....... then yo wont have a main character!!! it would just END!! right there!!! but.... you cant do this to him... not on his birthday.......... *almost pleading* cant you at least let him last until the day after?? so he can enjoy his birthday at least??

*the wolfidnas have gone completely silent*

TheGameArtCritic on September 15, 2008, 12:49:30 PM

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TheGameArtCriticMe: i can try...

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 11:02:53 AM

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mechadragon13Me: please..... please? *pleading look*

*the wolfidnas, even fria. have the same look*

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 12:02:31 PM

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TheGameArtCritictis teh DUN.

rawr.

Now he has an EXTRA day of suffering!

YAY! :D

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 12:27:38 PM

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mechadragon13everyone: *teh glare of DOOM* >:(

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 12:36:26 PM

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TheGameArtCriticok, that was uncalled for... sorry...

mechadragon13 on September 16, 2008, 12:40:55 PM

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mechadragon13Everyone: *glares soften, and turn back into a look of sadness*

Me: so...... is the condemned comic just gonna continue on with lupe, then?

TheGameArtCritic on September 16, 2008, 12:59:57 PM

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TheGameArtCriticme: no.

it will be all goodness.

mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 7:56:06 AM

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mechadragon13.....what?

TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 10:23:06 AM

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TheGameArtCriticIt means i want to remake the comic, yes, and the story afterwards will be up to me to continue.

It's tough to continue something that you left alone for months...

mechadragon13 on September 17, 2008, 10:31:11 AM

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mechadragon13i knowwww...... my fanfic is still on chapter 2 and i cant figure out what to do for chapter 3.................

TheGameArtCritic on September 17, 2008, 2:24:59 PM

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TheGameArtCriticarrrgh!!! I KNOOOOWWW!!!

It's just like.... "okaaayyyy.... now what?"

mechadragon13 on September 18, 2008, 2:47:19 AM

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mechadragon13EXACTLY. i cant figure out how acid'sgonna escape prison island, i cant figure out how sonic bumps into twilly scorch and fria, and i CANT FIGURE OUT A NAME FOR THEIR BAND!!! which alsoincludes zenith, neo, and human mish ^^

TheGameArtCritic on September 18, 2008, 9:31:11 AM

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TheGameArtCriticbaaaaaaaaaand?????

huh?

Yous are teh musically inclined?

mechadragon13 on September 19, 2008, 2:26:55 AM

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mechadragon13HELL yeah XD havent yo noticed how scorch and twilly act? sometimes fria? quoting music? singing every so often?

TheGameArtCritic on September 19, 2008, 10:17:14 AM

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TheGameArtCriticMeh: i do notice that. They sing nicely XD If i sing songs, it's usually from Death Cab For Cutie, Disturbed, or the always-loved Animal I Have Become, by Three Days Grace.

So what if you can see
the darkest side of me

so one will ever change
this animal i have become

mechadragon13 on September 20, 2008, 8:50:22 AM

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mechadragon13i sing a whole bunch of stuff. i have hilary duff stuck in my head.

hey boys,
are ya ready for the shock?
i'm livin' proof,
the girl can rock
spread the news around every single block,
hey boys...
the girl can rock!!!

TheGameArtCritic on September 22, 2008, 12:11:02 PM

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TheGameArtCriticGAAAAAAHHHHHH HILLARY DUFF!!!!

TRES MAL CHANTRE!!!

mechadragon13 on September 23, 2008, 11:46:19 AM

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mechadragon13hey, all my ipod has right now is hilary duff, the jo bros, the cranberries and enya. i have to get into itunes and/or steal some cd from my friends..... I NEED FOB AND LP!!! *dies*

TheGameArtCritic on September 23, 2008, 12:38:41 PM

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TheGameArtCriticdude. I LERV the Cranberries.

ZOMBIIIIIIIEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT!!!!!!!!!!

mechadragon13 on September 24, 2008, 2:27:22 AM

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mechadragon13...what? i only have one album...... OH! and i also have a variety of DDR songs from a cd that came with mah game XD

TheGameArtCritic on September 26, 2008, 12:23:02 PM

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TheGameArtCriticluckyyyyyyyyyyyyy......

anyway, Zombie. Yeah. Check it out.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FML9vEubYKY

mechadragon13 on September 27, 2008, 11:21:26 AM

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mechadragon13will do ^^

ShadzGirl on September 15, 2008, 5:30:35 AM

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ShadzGirlOK,that's something I didn't expect...So he was an Echidna before he was a demon-what's-it-or-other?

Maelstrom:....

Strike:...

Shane:????

Me:Oh well,still cool^^

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on September 14, 2008, 2:48:28 AM

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ShadowsGirlfriend1_0lol He has a loin cloth XD As if there is anything to cover....OR IS THERE!?! D8

Lovely description, it is amazing that Eclipse lasted so long. People with Cancer or AIDS don't last the long sometimes @_@ He must be magic then c: But the last line, does that mean it was a journal entry by Inderretta? He's a sneaky bastard XD

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 3:44:12 AM

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TheGameArtCritictanks ya, womaaaaaaaaan! XD

It was a journal entry he put in before he died. He was studying Condemned. He's been doing that a lot.

BECAUSE CONDEMNED HAZ TEH SPECIAL POWAHZ!!!!!

also, It IS weird how Eclipse is still alive and active (REALLY ACTIVE). He's not magic, that's for sure, but maybe it's because of how strong willed he is...

it would be crazy if one ay, Eclipse was all healthy, and being his emo self, then falls over and dies from being "overused".

Actually, that would make a funny comic XD

ShadowsGirlfriend1_0 on September 14, 2008, 4:54:07 AM

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ShadowsGirlfriend1_0Oh lawd XD And everyone around him would start freaking out. And Sonic would just be standing, like nothing happened....

.....FOR SIX HOURS 8D like that other comic! Ah, yes, that would be awesome X3

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 5:01:31 AM

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TheGameArtCriticmah GOOOSH!!! YES!!!!

Falconlobo on September 13, 2008, 1:51:41 PM

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Falconlobocool outfit love the boots

TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 1:53:57 PM

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TheGameArtCriticthanks! Didja read the description?

Falconlobo on September 13, 2008, 1:58:05 PM

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Falconloboi thought he was a hedgehog but i guess he took on some of Eclipse's form

TheGameArtCritic on September 13, 2008, 2:05:26 PM

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TheGameArtCritictrue. He melts onto the form of the host. He lost his body, so he must use other's

Falconlobo on September 13, 2008, 2:07:57 PM

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Falconloboah okay so his body takes on the looks of the host a bit

TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 2:20:33 AM

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TheGameArtCriticyup!

btw, I'm recreating the 1st issue of Condemned for the comic's anniversary

Falconlobo on September 14, 2008, 2:36:41 AM

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Falconlobocool^^

Falconlobo on September 13, 2008, 1:57:11 PM

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Falconloboyes i did not quite understand it was this condemned's original body or one he possessed

SpiralDemon on September 14, 2008, 12:59:52 AM

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TheGameArtCritic on September 14, 2008, 2:19:30 AM

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TheGameArtCriticyou mean with a pencil? I SURE DO! XD

.................. but sometimes i ink.